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Billy looked over at his wife, "Actually, we thought about taking a vacation. You know, clear the mind. Can I get back to you on that?"

"Sure, sure." John looked over at his Creative Editor, "Before you go, perhaps something to think about, Steve had some thoughts."

"I assume you're both tired of the nightclub scene...or not," he laughed seeing them look at each other, "but as you know, your articles are reprinted literally around the world." He looked at the couple, "I was thinking. Why this city? Why not other cities? We talked about it and thought you both could go around the States, three months spent in each place, and review the club scenes there. Then, come back, relax, and in a month head out again."

John added excitedly, "Hell, why just the States? Toronto, Vancouver, London." Our readers would love to hear about the challenges of a married couple trying to enjoy a night out."

Billy looked at Jennifer, "I don't know. We both have friends here and if we're away for three months at a time..."

"Along with three months a year paid time off." John interjected, "But, again, don't decide now. Go on vacation. Have fun."

"It does sound fun," Billy said to Jennifer, "We could travel, go places we've always wanted to visit."

"I don't know about this, Billy. I um, sort of slipped up on our last club." She looked around the table, "I actually feel so embarrassed that was so widely publicized. I don't even want to know what you think of me. If we go club hopping in other cities, I'd hope I don't give in to all the temptations..."

John nodded at Ted who slid a printout over to the couple, "Look at columns C and D. Circulation and Advertising Revenue. You'll see on top, the four weeks before Billy here started his articles." He looked at their eyes scanning the page. "Yep, notice the huge jump at the end, that's all you. Without your giving into temptations..."

"So you were counting on my fucking someone, weren't you? Now you want me to screw more strangers? I feel terrible as it is. I'm not some whore." Jennifer said indignantly.

"Good Lord! Of course not. Ted was simply pointing out the silver lining. All of us were hoping you'd stay strong and resist what had to be unbelievable temptations, but there's no denying it. Your straying meant sales went through the roof. All the numbers are terrific. This whole project is your call. You want LA? Go to LA. You want Omaha? Go. Hell, I'll bet the Honolulu club scene is incredible. You have the corporate card, use it. I'm sure you learned from your transgressions." John said.

"I did. I cannot imagine letting myself go again." The girl said, feeling her nipples clench as she mulled over the possibilities.

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TwmatthewsTwmatthewsabout 2 months ago

I found the story interesting but with one flaw, changing behavior. The wife was able to resist temptation for months at a time and even after being aroused, took that arousal out on her husband. The last encounter with the club owner was inconsistent with the wife's prior behavior. First, she shut off the recorder. Second, she seemed fine with screwing the owner in front of another man. Then, encouraged a threesome and finally giving up her anal cherry to someone other than her husband. There was no explanation justifying this change in behavior and to me, detracted from the story. Out of character actions mean that you can make a character do something inconsistent with the image with which you drew the character. This seems like a cop out to me.

MtRseMan99MtRseMan993 months ago

Once again another great story but with a very different slant.

IEnjoyEroticaIEnjoyErotica5 months ago

Getting a story is one thing. Keeping a whore is another.

DickTraceyDickTracey5 months ago

Fantastic gotta love people who love their work.

Well done.

blackknight314blackknight314about 1 year ago

Story? Hot! But I still hated it! Hated seeing him and her being manipulated for the almighty dollar. Ruined a great relationship. Turned him into a cuck albeit with his own culpability.

AnotherSisyphusAnotherSisyphusover 1 year ago

Excellent story and writing. I think you have nailed the goals you stated on your authors bio in this and other stories. Your characters sometimes give me the willies, but they are true to their nature and make interesting decisions based upon their nature and experience.

I liked the couples honesty and love for each other, and especially liked the unblinking honesty after the last club review. Life is complicated. That came through in this story. Thank you for giving us a thoughtful and well written story.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 2 years ago
huh

i would have sent her packin

TotosRevengeTotosRevengeabout 2 years ago

Well written but not for me. As you wrote so well I won't t give a rating

InfosaugerInfosaugerover 3 years ago

I'm not sure, if this marriage will survive. One way would be to have Billy pick up and seduce woman while the wife has to hear everything. Then she understands the pain.

TajfaTajfaalmost 5 years ago
Divorce on the way

Good writing - hated that she became a total slut. No way their marriage will survive when she ends up a disease ridden whore.

calibammacalibammaalmost 5 years ago
One Star ⭐️

Wrong ending she was a slut after all. What happened to the so called strong woman we constantly see plastered on the big screen today enduring to the end without failing?

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 6 years ago
Very high quality, good erotic writing ruined by the vile taste of some ugly actions

Sad tale of greed, ambition, thinking with genitalia, and an asshole set of editors combining to debase the finer parts of a relationship.

Hope they can heal that. Remember, if you want to be married to a pro/slut; just marry one

They are more likely than regular gals to deal with being a hot wife without relationship complications

ArglwyddiagoArglwyddiagoalmost 6 years ago
Fantastic

Loved this story, so original. The trailer is that Jennifer might want more. Love to see a follow up where B and J go back to the club. ask to see the manager, refuse bouncers offer of Jennifer only

Reluctant owner invites both up.

"surprised to see your husband here Jennifer is there going to be any trouble"

"No not at all, we've worked it out. We want to play again but as a couple"

Explain please

Jennifer smiled and started taking off her shirt

"I'd like the three of you to make me airtight!"

You are the best hard sex writer I know. I was very excited throughout your whole story and your description of the three some in the manager's room made me extremely hot.

I think it would be astounding if you could write that sort of graphic sex detail for this story line

Thanks again for a great story

Simon

carbilz4carbilz4about 6 years ago
Story of the year

I will vote for this when it's time. I also loved Hole in One. Please keep writing.

starmanfivestarmanfiveabout 6 years ago
Very creative

What a great original story

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