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And Ashley had someone who deserved her. A man who could take care of her and give her what she needed. She seemed happy and I could live with that.
In recent years, when Ashley and I have been around one another, we never discussed the past. We pretended like it never happened, but it was always there. We were like two people who chose to have an amicable split, because of circumstances. We've gone on to be just brother and sister. There is a distance, but we can still see the love in one another's eyes. Even when the opportunity to be alone has arisen, which is on the rarest of occasions, the timing has never been right to talk about our relationship. We still love each other.
Everyone sees it. We are still in love with one another... And then there is Little John (we call him JJ now). He sure grew up to be a handsome young man. He's a chip off the old block. Unlike myself, he'll have his dad in his life. He just won't know it's me. He'll also have his stepfather, who certainly has shown him great affection, since he chose to take on Ashley.
In the end, Ash had come to realize that societies' taboos were just too much to overcome and I was forced to accept reality. Like Ash had told me, "You can't run away from your problems." We couldn't run away and abandon the world. There was just too much at stake. We both found partners who wanted us and would help us move on. Even if we couldn't be together, we would always have JJ and every time we looked at that boy there would be no remorse for what had transpired. Our love would be wrapped up in helping that little boy be successful at life. Reality set in and Life would go on...
- COMMENTS
HOG57headover 1 year agoGod what a sad story. I cried damn near every chapter. Unrequited love. There are few things more sad.
Hragsalmost 4 years agoI am going to read chapter 27. Hope it ends well. I read the other story about this family first. Joe left Mom became a drunk. Mom and son were in love too and sleeping together. Even after 27 chapters I would Love more chapters, lol
Anonymousover 7 years agoI have no words to describe my disappointment in the ending. But it is your writing and your story. As I stated before I created the disappointment by trying to write my own ending. You are a fine writer and wish you the best! One more thing, I don't normally get so emotionally involved in a fictional story or character. I think it was the time length of the story that kept me so ingrained in the story. I think I will stick to the shorter happy ever after stories. I work with reality daily, I don't care to read about it.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI found this story several years ago and read it from the beginning to the end. It has pissed me off in so many ways, but I've never been able to stop reading it. It has taken you forever to write this, but I can see why. Your grammar isn't perfect, but you have obviously given so much attention to detail that I can't fault you for a few minor errors.
This story is crazy. What an imagination you have. Jim is forced into a relationship where he is between happy and tormented. It is obvious that he still is deeply in love with his sister. He can't seem to let it go. Ashley loves him so much that she's willing to let him go. It is obvious that Jim also loves Jill, this chapter just drips with his sincere love for her. No one can seem to let anyone go. You have made it all so hard. I wish I could hate someone, but I don't. I don't even hate the mother any more.
This story has stirred up so many emotions. You have become a great writer over time. The first chapters are nothing compared to when it all turned in Chapter 8. This thing is like a blazing fire after that and it was pretty good before then. Seems like the end here. Congrats, you won me over!
Turtle1952over 7 years agothis story ticked all my boxes as a great read.
thank you and please keep writing
