Babydoll Ch. 27

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She stared at me deeply, seriously, the spirit of her love in her eyes emblazoned on my own, "We'll find a way to make this work," she had given me hope. "We'll find a way to be together." She wasn't going to abandon me anymore. "We can have it all."

I was thinking, maybe, just maybe, this could work out some way. Maybe there could be a happily ever after.

THE END

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This is the end of this story arc. At some point in time there may be another tale to tell involving these characters, but for now, you can imagine what happens to Jimmy, Ashley, and the family... In this moment you can see that they are happy and have every intention of being happy going forward.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago
The mother deserves severe punishment.

She separated them. Got between them. She deserves to be punished.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I loved every minute of this story I was so angry with the mother for tearing apart such a good love between brother and sister..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I just found this story. And I have to admit,I had mixed feeling about it from the beginning. As I continued on my opinion seem to change about Jimmy and Ashley. I was really mad at there mother for doing what she did to them. As I read on things being to change more and more. I could not stop reading, I was hooked! I had no idea there were so many chapters,but I couldn't stop. So I wound up bing reading until I finished. The story line is different. But extremely well written.now that Ashley and Jimmy are finely back together. I wonder what will happen with Jill? Ashley and Jimmy do fully love each other. ,but Jill and their daughter deserve better. I could almost see Jill allowing this to go on because she knows what took place between the brother and sister long before she came into the picture.At one point I even thought that Mom and Ashley would share Jimmy, and life out ther loves together. When Jill intered the picture and became his girlfriend ,it could have changed from family love and girlfriend love to one big family that Jimmy would take care of ,and they would all have separate days with Jimmy. There are so many avenues that could have even considered between them. I almost wish this story would continue as one big happy family until they were Big Daddies age . I was shocked (at myself) quite often as to my emotions coming into play and actually had tears running down my face ,that Ashley and Jimmy couldn't find a way to be together permanently. Excellent story...Excellent writing, and one hell of an imagination by the writer! I will be subscribing to this author to read more of these stories!

Bigfletch111Bigfletch111over 1 year ago

I have read this entire story and have pivoted between being pissed off at Jimmy for basically raping Ash in the beginning, to hoping they find a way, to pissed at Jimmy for being such a shit to Jill, to satisfied that while Ash was the tragic character, she found someone in the end, and now back to pissed at both of them. Jimmy doesn’t deserve Jill.

davidpaz12davidpaz12about 2 years ago

This is the best story I ever red.

I hope your other stories will be so good as this one.

Very well done!

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