All Comments on 'BBW Samantha and Mitch'

Two really big problems here: first, the shift from past tense to present halfway through is very jarring; second, lots of basic editing mistakes. "far as I had went"? Please.

Great story, write more.

A BBW lover.

Get one of Lit's volunteer editors to help you fix up your next piece so that the errors don't distract from the reader's satisfaction.

I liked the story. I can relate to your story somewhat in the fact that I'm a BBW and I have an online lover, too. Several years older than me, also. I've considered writing, telling our story. Your story pushes me a little closer to that. Thanks!

I just want to say thank you for all the comments. I apoligize about some of the mistakes I left when editing. This is the first story I have written, and I wrote it rather quickly. I realize now that I didn't spend as much time editing this as I should have. I will make a continuation on this story, and will spend more time editing it. I'll also have an editor check it before publishing. I hope my next story will be more enjoyable reading.

That story was so hot... and I am so fucking hard because of it!!!

Thanx

That was hot and now I'm so horny from reading this story. I love big boobs and BBW too. Love to read more story from you sexiBBW

amazing story sister! i too am a bbw and loving every pound of it. your writing is tantilizing and raw. i love it. thank you for the pleasure of reading.

You cannot feel blood pulsing inside a cock-just so you know.

Sometimes the mutual sexual attraction hits you like a brick. Sometimes it sneaks up on you and slaps you in the face. Just keep looking, please. Don't give up.

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