by SexiBBW
Sometimes the mutual sexual attraction hits you like a brick. Sometimes it sneaks up on you and slaps you in the face. Just keep looking, please. Don't give up.
Orpheum69
amazing story sister! i too am a bbw and loving every pound of it. your writing is tantilizing and raw. i love it. thank you for the pleasure of reading.
That was hot and now I'm so horny from reading this story. I love big boobs and BBW too. Love to read more story from you sexiBBW
That story was so hot... and I am so fucking hard because of it!!!
Thanx
I just want to say thank you for all the comments. I apoligize about some of the mistakes I left when editing. This is the first story I have written, and I wrote it rather quickly. I realize now that I didn't spend as much time editing this as I should have. I will make a continuation on this story, and will spend more time editing it. I'll also have an editor check it before publishing. I hope my next story will be more enjoyable reading.
I liked the story. I can relate to your story somewhat in the fact that I'm a BBW and I have an online lover, too. Several years older than me, also. I've considered writing, telling our story. Your story pushes me a little closer to that. Thanks!
Get one of Lit's volunteer editors to help you fix up your next piece so that the errors don't distract from the reader's satisfaction.
Two really big problems here: first, the shift from past tense to present halfway through is very jarring; second, lots of basic editing mistakes. "far as I had went"? Please.