by a_libertine
erotic and sexual...tension and release. I really enjoyed it. Thank you and please keep the story going!
Good start to what could be a very enticing tale. Please continue!
Sizzling, awesome, exciting, captivating - just a few adjectives to describe your work.
Great story, want to see a series made out of this! keep up the good writing!
A good beginning, looks very promising. Looking forward to the next installment.