by a_libertine
A good beginning, looks very promising. Looking forward to the next installment.
Great story, want to see a series made out of this! keep up the good writing!
Sizzling, awesome, exciting, captivating - just a few adjectives to describe your work.
Good start to what could be a very enticing tale. Please continue!
erotic and sexual...tension and release. I really enjoyed it. Thank you and please keep the story going!