All Comments on 'Beyond Expectations'

I REALLY want to see a sequal. I'm a big fan of romance, so I'd like to see a happy ending- them moving in together, or getting married, or whatnot. Hey- this is Vegas. We do weddings all the time...

Both the plot and the characters were believably developed.

Story is good. but the comment about prosutition is wrong. I know several people who do that type of work for a living. and enjoy it.

I really liked this story myself but considering her line of work I was a little disturbed that a condom wasn't used.Other than that, I'd like to see what else she teaches him before he leaves Vegas.

that is a great story!

totally loved it =)

Looking forward to a sequel =)

I love first time stories, and this was the ultimate. Good romance, good characters and a great teacher. I can't say enough about it. I just hope there's a lot more to cum.

This story is among the best-written stories I have ever read. It's hard, if not impossible, to write a sex scene without sounding either technical or then cheesy, but this one is just beautiful - without being sugary either. Both characters seemed very accurate, and time is spent to let the reader get to know them before the action takes place. To cut it short, I loved this story.

with interesting details and intimate touches that made you like the characters. Good job.

that was some story. excellent detail showed their emotions. i liked it and i'm gonna recommend it to a friend. why haven't you made a seqeul yet?

Its almost as If the author doesn't realise how good he is with this story. Good sex and very believable.

I had a problem with the disclaimer. It seems somewhat hypocritical to have a character have such an experience and then operate a double standard. Let's face it any unprotected sex is potentially dangerous.

Please print a part two; Great story!

Great story ......... But I agree with u on the prostitution part that it unsafe practice.............!

Thank you for a wonderful story. My own first time was very similar in all the pertinent details. Your story brought a flood of memories to me.