by onlyinadream
Thank you for a wonderful story. My own first time was very similar in all the pertinent details. Your story brought a flood of memories to me.
Great story ......... But I agree with u on the prostitution part that it unsafe practice.............!
I had a problem with the disclaimer. It seems somewhat hypocritical to have a character have such an experience and then operate a double standard. Let's face it any unprotected sex is potentially dangerous.
Its almost as If the author doesn't realise how good he is with this story. Good sex and very believable.
that was some story. excellent detail showed their emotions. i liked it and i'm gonna recommend it to a friend. why haven't you made a seqeul yet?
with interesting details and intimate touches that made you like the characters. Good job.
This story is among the best-written stories I have ever read. It's hard, if not impossible, to write a sex scene without sounding either technical or then cheesy, but this one is just beautiful - without being sugary either. Both characters seemed very accurate, and time is spent to let the reader get to know them before the action takes place. To cut it short, I loved this story.
I love first time stories, and this was the ultimate. Good romance, good characters and a great teacher. I can't say enough about it. I just hope there's a lot more to cum.
that is a great story!
totally loved it =)
Looking forward to a sequel =)
I really liked this story myself but considering her line of work I was a little disturbed that a condom wasn't used.Other than that, I'd like to see what else she teaches him before he leaves Vegas.
Story is good. but the comment about prosutition is wrong. I know several people who do that type of work for a living. and enjoy it.
I REALLY want to see a sequal. I'm a big fan of romance, so I'd like to see a happy ending- them moving in together, or getting married, or whatnot. Hey- this is Vegas. We do weddings all the time...