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Click hereFinally, and without notice, he pushed the head into her ass with a pop but he didn't push any further. He stayed lightly connected with Lynn and Madison disappeared then reappeared with a giant bottle of Jack that had a special delivery that started small but quick got larger and larger.
With cap still on she buried the bottle into her twat pushing it as far as it would go. As that happened Gene buried the rest of his dick into her ass. The fucked in rhythm; Gene rocking her ass with his cock and Madison rocking her twat with the bottle of Jack.
They pounded in unison for 10 minutes before Lynn and Gene came at the same moment. Gene deposited his seed deep in her bowels and Lynn came on the neck of the bottle.
Finally, they finished and Gene pulled out and took the mike again. All right guys remember the pay schedule; hand jobs where you cum on her are $20, BJ spit or swallowed are $50, $100 for her pussy with a condom, $250 with no condom and $500 for the anus that has only been used once now.
Before then feel free to take some shots of Jack. With that two of the men grabbed her legs and lifted them straight up in the air and spread them. Her shoulders rested on the saw horses as she was held upside down. Gene then took the bottle of Jack and took the top off and re-buried it back in her pussy. Liquid started to fill her canal before being plugged closed by the bottle. Some of the Jack ran down her body, which a group of surrounding men started licking off every inch of her body. A lucky few got into line and the bottle would be pulled out so they could drink it from her twat before being jammed back and filling her again.
This went on for about 15 minutes until all the Jack was gone. At that point Lynn's naked body was picked up and placed on top of the crowd for an extreme naked crowd surf, hands and fingers going everywhere. Then without a warning she disappeared into the middle of the crowd and John wouldn't see her again until he found her in the back of the room 7 hours later...but the camera men never lost sight even if the TVs had been turned off...
Your story is entertaining, I like the pace the betrayal and all that. The only thing that really disappointed me, is how dull the character Lynn was. Almost only physical descriptions and in this particular story she is just a thing that's fucked. I know the intention is to show how they use her as an object but that has no intensity if you make her an actual object you need the contradiction of showing how human alive and completr she and her husband feels with the act of treating her like a piece of meat. In these wife husband stories, the thrilling part is how their relationship is compromised but we dont know much about even her physical reactions were kinda dull. Its a nice story but with that final aspect covered would have been just perfect.
Not that bad, not as bad as some of the comments. A anal dildo auction where people bid to add inches to her insertion. Now that would be hot. She would be impaled with a significant flexible dildo a good 12 inches, but then the strokes would gradually get deeper and deeper. At 16 inches she is surprised by an anal plug like a portion of dildo curved to accept another dildo once inserted. It's 4 1/2 inches and makes every cock or dildo insertion that much deeper in her ass. Now ever average dick is 10 inches or more. Then she's confronted with yet another 4 1/2 inch plug making every average cock 15 and 16 inches but more importantly, the dildo, the 18 inch dildo that she's taken 16inches of so far, can now plow her two feet deep in her stomach. The only way out is to beg for more, and when she begs for more she gets it. Finally, the anal violators confess that she's not leaving till she takes 30 plus inches up her ass, and even that might not be enough.
You spell the word "waste" when you obviously meant to use "waist" ... you have missing words and misspelled words. The plot is idiotic; why would the husband agree to return to the clubhouse which can miraculously hold "thousands" of men. Not good--I agree with the comment that you need to get an editor.