BirthRight Ch. 07-12

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"Wow. This is hard to believe. What if she's like my great-great-grandmother or something?"

"I doubt that?" Tyrone said. Tyrese sent him a pitying look for speaking without thinking.

She arched her brow. "Why?"

"You don't look like her." He frowned at Tyrese.

"You don't look like me and I'm your mother. I guarantee you that. I've got the blood tests to prove it. You wanna explain again why this woman can't be related to me?" Her voice hardened.

There was one thing Jasmine Bennett hated. Bigotry. She'd drilled it into them when they were small. If something had a sniff of it in any form, she'd get riled. As kids, they knew better than to ever tease a child or adult who looked different or had special challenges. She had zero tolerance for slurs or slights. In high school, he and Tyrone had been popular because they accepted everybody as friends. Not best friends, but friends.

Tyrone sighed. "I'm sorry. I guess I don't want her to be related, so that's why I said that. She's creepy, Mom."

"She's old and grew up in a different era. You'd be creepy too." She smacked his hand as she stood. "I thought you guys had a meeting?"

Tyrese jumped up, looked at his watch and cursed. He pecked her on the cheek and headed for the door, Tyrone behind him. They had ten minutes.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More please!

You have my attention! Please continue writing their story, I want to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I love this story. I get so excited when I see a new chapter! I think its one of the best here on lit!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent story

Disregard the previous negative comment! I think your story is not only interesting but erotic with a possibility of romance if Silas forgets his bigotry towards half-breeds. Yes, a bit uncomfortable for the boys to be present during the "sexathon" but it fit within the parameters of the storyline and doubtful Silas would have touched her that early in the story. Love it! Please continue! Thanks.

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 9 years ago
Maybe I'll finish it later

Again, excellent writing skills; good imagery, action scenes, and dialogue.

However the whole thing about the sons knowing there mother needs to be screwed was a tad bit weird. The sex scene was hot but I still couldn't get passed this part and stopped maybe halfway through the chapter because I became disinterested. You really showed the bonding and love between the mom and sons and it was just weird that this happened in my own opinion. You may have cleared it up later in the chapter but just giving you my comment as it stands now.

To be honest, I kind of saw this coming with the whole human women being used as basically breeding sex slaves and it was a little too dark to me. It reminded of a lot of books on Amazon in this genre, which is good for you in that it puts you on that skill level, but again a little too weird for me.

Thanks for posting!

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