All Comments on 'Blowjob School - The Locker Room'

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KieranLoveKieranLoveabout 6 years ago
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Action packed with a well set scene

EffusionEffusionabout 6 years ago
Action packed, cool story

Plot and overall idea was excellent. I enjoyed it totally. Mrs Bloomers is fantastic character. I would love to see her compete with Mrs Savage :) Also less Mr Hopper is better. New male character gave more fresh to this series.

My wish - more descriptions. Take your time with writing about blowjob and especially anal sequence. Idea with the teacher "sacrifices" herself - absolutely top. That was such a whore act.

The best episode for a long time :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ehhhh

You're so quick to fall into the same pattern of your other story and those chapters it's almost copy paste change a name and location. It was a decent story but take your time, slow down build the plot better. I mean a teacher isn't going to just give it up that easily to a demanding student, I would have had him take pictures and blackmail her. Just my thoughts

wolfbadgerwolfbadgerabout 6 years ago
love these stories hoping for more!

very hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think if you started writing Blowjob School stories without using the words "shoved" or "rammed," the quality would instantly double.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OK

I have looked at this one first.

I'm done.

You cannot write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like when he pushes the girl to her knees and face fucks her

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