by AirWrites
I think if you started writing Blowjob School stories without using the words "shoved" or "rammed," the quality would instantly double.
You're so quick to fall into the same pattern of your other story and those chapters it's almost copy paste change a name and location. It was a decent story but take your time, slow down build the plot better. I mean a teacher isn't going to just give it up that easily to a demanding student, I would have had him take pictures and blackmail her. Just my thoughts
Plot and overall idea was excellent. I enjoyed it totally. Mrs Bloomers is fantastic character. I would love to see her compete with Mrs Savage :) Also less Mr Hopper is better. New male character gave more fresh to this series.
My wish - more descriptions. Take your time with writing about blowjob and especially anal sequence. Idea with the teacher "sacrifices" herself - absolutely top. That was such a whore act.
The best episode for a long time :)