Carpe Carnis

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Shadowine
Shadowine
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"Yes," She hissed, batting her over mascaraed eyelashes. "Fuck me with me with that big cock." Sam rolled her eyes at the cheap dialogue but as she watched, her own body was responding to his roughness.

Her sweet spot was moist now and her fingers glided in and out of her hot pussy, exploring every crease and fold. A soft whimper escaped her lips as she watched the man pound down into the woman's womb with such force her whole body shook. He held onto her legs like reins and bit the soft flesh of her calf in ecstasy.

Both Sam and the woman on TV cried out as their pleasure spiked. If only someone was here to pleasure her like that. She just wanted someone to pound her into oblivion until an orgasm wracked her brain stupid. She wanted to feel full and stretched, complete.

The woman was nearly bent in half now as the man leaned over her and grabbed her breasts. They were clearly fake, but the woman squealed as he kneaded her nipples and took them gently between his teeth. It made Sam reach under her shirt and fondle her own breasts.

She was ready to get off long before the woman on the TV. It had been a couple of weeks since she had felt this strong of an urge to masturbate and her body was more than ready. Faster and faster, she rubbed on her clit and dipped a finger into her pussy while she squeezed her breasts as hard as she could.

Her cry of release filled the dark house as she allowed herself the opportunity to go wild. Her body arched off the couch and stars flashed before her eyes as she gasped, "Ahhhhh! Holy shit!" Her own cries drowned out the moaning of the couple on TV.

"Holy crap that was awesome..." She whimpered as her body began to crash back down to earth. She kept rubbing her sensitive clit even though her orgasm had finished and it made her legs twitch with little aftershocks. Very slowly, the sounds of the world came back into focus. The rain continued to beat down and thunder crashed near enough to keep shaking the house. The woman on TV was being fucked from behind now and the man had a finger that was knuckle deep into her ass too.

That was a big no for Sam. That was an exit only hole, and she had been extremely adamant with Brian the few times he had dared ask that it was a complete deal breaker. How could people enjoy such a dirty act?

Now that she was satisfied, Sam fished around in her nest to find the remote and switched the channel just as he was trying to wiggle finger number two into her ass. Once she had finally settled on an old episode of House, she curled up in a flushed ball with her blankets pulled tightly around her. This time, sleep found her quickly and she passed out with a smile.

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ShadowineShadowineover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 will be submitted tonight!

I had to go over a lot of things thanks to all of your support and helpful suggestions. You guys make the story better and I appreciate every one of you!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Definitely a good start

I too like forced slavery if she is strong and kickass ...Security Binds Her type story.

Will wait patiently for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good start

Good start, just a little light on action. I assume there will be more action in future chapters so I will look forward to those. Unlike one of the earlier comments, I like a bit more nonconsenting in my nonconsent stories, so to each their own. I like the way you write, so I think I will like the story however the consent level works out.

ShadowineShadowineover 9 years agoAuthor
A little insight into Carpe Carnis

Honestly, thank you guys for your support! This story will have forced sexual slavery later on and there is quite a bit that the main characters dislike/definite nonconsent. Its a fight to survive in a way and it'll be brutal. But there will be more depth to it. I wanted this to be an actual fictional story. Does that make sense? I won't give away spoilers but later on I do believe there is a savior for Sam. Shes a strong girl, it will take a lot to break her. She must hold out. The next chapter will be submitted very soon! As for that creepy Charger, you'll have to wait and see. Thats a spoiler ;)

magevmagevover 9 years ago
Good beginning

You are setting up the story quite nicely, I hope the updates will be frequent enough so the readers can remember what happened in the previous chapters. One note about editing - it would be more helpful to the reader if you could distinguish direct speech when somebody actually says something out loud from thoughts that are being said in someone's head. The latter could be written in italics rather than in quotation marks, or something like that.

And one question about the story. I really like reluctance stories where the girl is resisting and the guy makes her come despite herself, as long as there is no violence and as long as free will is maintained. For that reason, I am ambivalent towards slavery stories - I can appreciate forced slavery as a plot device, but such stories only bring satisfaction if at the end the slave escapes and the bad guy is properly punished or, best case scenario, regrets his treatment of the girl and repents, and spends a long time groveling and making up for the injustice. I really hate stories where the girl ends up liking slavery. I can understand and appreciate voluntary submission, but those stories belong in the BDSM category, not under nonconsent - paradoxically, even if it's slavery, if the slave actually enjoys and wants that forced sex, it can no longer be described as nonconsent... It is also pretty ridiculous when those stories end up labeled as romance, because there can be no true romance without true free will and equality - even if later there is a submission-dominance type relationship, the choice to submit has to be made completely freely for it to count as romance, which is impossible under conditions of slavery... I am writing all this because I would greatly appreciate it if you could let me know whether this will be a story of perseverance and triumph against slavery at the end, or if the girl will end up broken and happy with her sorry lot - if it's the latter scenario, I'd rather not start reading the story that will end up only disappointing me (despite the fact that you're a really good writer).

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