by joiphulone
I liked this story a lot. It was very well-written, and I felt like I was part of the action. I'm looking forward to Chapter Three!
This reads best when read after chapter one. I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 3! This one got better near the end with the unexpected twist. I could feel the fear she was experiencing! Keep up the good work!
I'm sitting here squirming, can we have the next chapter, pretty please. I'm dying to know what her Master will do.
This is frustrating. No matter what Subject stories are in they should be Finished.