All Comments on 'Changing of the Roles Ch. 02'

by joiphulone

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C_frommnC_frommnabout 7 years ago
Another Incomplete Story.

This is frustrating. No matter what Subject stories are in they should be Finished.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
More Please

I'm sitting here squirming, can we have the next chapter, pretty please. I'm dying to know what her Master will do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Getting Hotter!

This reads best when read after chapter one. I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 3! This one got better near the end with the unexpected twist. I could feel the fear she was experiencing! Keep up the good work!

jazzfiendjazzfiendabout 20 years ago
Very good!

I liked this story a lot. It was very well-written, and I felt like I was part of the action. I'm looking forward to Chapter Three!

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