All Comments on 'Circle7 Ch. 03'

by TheIrishTux

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wingnitwingnitabout 8 years ago
Great story

Even Lucifer can have a good day!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

That's the end?? It can't be!! More please :))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More?

Good but feels unfinished.

TheIrishTuxTheIrishTuxabout 8 years agoAuthor
Check my bio...

For what I'm currently writing. Most people don't read my forewords, apparently. This was the end of the beginning :)

aHolidayaHolidayabout 8 years ago

Not the ending I was expecting but really good. Looking forward to what is next for Luke and Britney.

Hellfire23Hellfire23about 8 years ago
Interesting

Good story. An interesting take on an often told tale. I liked that twist at the end where Lucifer excercised free will in spite of the fact that he just said that angels aren't allowed that privilege. I look forward to more stories from this universe.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
Really awesome tale!

A very insightful interesting extraordinary story! I enjoyed what you did with this and definitely am looking forward to an epilogue!

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 8 years ago
Cheesy ending

but I liked the first two chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Write a book...

Please...mate...write a book!

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