by TheIrishTux
A very insightful interesting extraordinary story! I enjoyed what you did with this and definitely am looking forward to an epilogue!
Good story. An interesting take on an often told tale. I liked that twist at the end where Lucifer excercised free will in spite of the fact that he just said that angels aren't allowed that privilege. I look forward to more stories from this universe.
Not the ending I was expecting but really good. Looking forward to what is next for Luke and Britney.
For what I'm currently writing. Most people don't read my forewords, apparently. This was the end of the beginning :)