Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereTell the truth, there is enough food for three weeks for four people. My sister, my parents and myself. Though it is more of a practice hobby on the end of the world things. Not that I'm paranoid, I doubt the world is going to end in my lifetime. It's just a hobby of mine. "Oh, well, I guess we can stay for one night. After we're rested, we can try a few more things out. I haven't used my mouth on you yet, and I really want you to go down on me for damn sure."
Kissing her cheek, she leaned into it softly with a wanting more sigh. "Don't worry, we have two weeks to make up for lost time. We can call this the countdown to your birthday," Glaring at me with irritation, I gave a look of defense. "Sorry, our birthday."
Wish I could give it a 5 star. Man... I really want to edit this story myself. Not much hope of getting edited version of this one I guess as the writer is not seen for 5 years.
PLEASE SOMEONE PICK THIS ONE IF POSSIBLE.
I wish someone would pick this story (as the writer is not seen for sometime) to polish it and make it the real 5 star story idea that it has. It has a very good plot. Not much needed to make it a great series too.
But your spelling would embarrass an undereducated 12 year old.
Learn the difference between there, their, and they're
To walk behind someone is to follow, fallow is leaving a field unplanted for a year to rest the soil
Unfortunately your spelling is so utterly appalling, and your inability to put a coherent sentence together, made it impossible for me to get past about the middle of the second page on my screen. Especially when you wrote SON instead of SUN. That was one of god knows how many spelling mistakes you made, such as disserve, instead of deserve, fallow instead of follow, than instead of then, the list would just go on and on. Sorry but for me this story is unreadable as it is just too infuriating.