by moreandmore
Thanks for your originality, fresh plot and great writing. You are a pleasure to read.
Keep 'em comin'.
I think the police would have been able to get forensic evidence of the snakes being in the bathroom. Putting a venomous snake in the boyfriends car, was also a bad idea. Beyond that, I thought it was an interesting take on a BTB.
Still gave it 5 stars, for his ability to take down a smug, self assured cheater.
That was quite the BTB.
But I do think it was too extreme and sadistic.
I think it was the husband who mentally "snapped" and needs a psychiatric therapy, not the wife.
I do wish there was some details about the wife after she gets out of hospital.
Thanks to the author for sharing his effort.
Even with the some of the issues in the story it was still fun. Mean, and rather sadistic but kinda fun in a creepy icky way.
Awful! There are two things that terrify.me beyond all reason. One is any snake. The other is the knowledge that Kampala Harris will be President when Uncle Squint is article 25ed.
snakes, like em, admire them, see one got to catch it and count coup. mostly deal w/ adults, tried to count coup on a juvenile, big mistake, much more flexible, if you can imagine, and it got me w/ one fang, finger isnt quite 100% the same but I fooled around and paid the price. dont hate the snake, bought a profssional snake grabber, still chase after them. caviat, ran into a cottonmouth, 5-6 ft long, 6in wide maybe 8, left him alone. I wouldnt fuck w/ an alligator longer than 3 feet, my admiration and need dont often overule common sense. people know to call me to relocate snakes vs killing them. a critic wrote that the husband was cruel to punish using snakes, how odd, didnt seem to feel much about her cheating on husband, well damn me, it was her right? to use her body as she saw fit? I was thinking that he should have said , "I'll take the snakes out if you promise to sign the divorce papers asap.If she broke that promise also, well then she could meet a poisonous snake too, like boyfriend.
As lots of your stories, echoes of Harddsysknight. Major props to you for your creativity, wit (Okay, twisted sense of humor), and playfulness with words.
"Burning the Bitch" is one thing. Sadistic cruelty is something else altogether. You went too far.
Some of the commenters here just don't seem to get it. This is *fiction* and not the author's diary. So it's over the top, so what?
Good story. Evil, but still good.
Brilliant! Hilarious! Beautifully scripted, well-crafted, deliciously OTT, with just the right `hint-of-psychotic malice'! Very well done, a real work of art, thank you,
Richard.
Honestly disgusting. I'm all for a cheating wife getting her comeuppance, but this was just simply torture.
I mean i get it, it's fiction, but come on.
How interesting; using aversion therapy alter a person's bad habits. Cruel? Somewhat, but it did seem to be most effective.
The best fuckin you can give someone, is a mind-fuckin. Broken bones will heal, but mental scars will last a lifetime.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ good job! 👍 funny as hell.
not_a_viking_etc. Go read something else. I'm told that there are plenty of cuck stories somewhere.
not_a_viking must discriminate against snakes just because they got no fucking legs.
3 Stars as I thought the snakes were over kill . Just get Pictures and have fun that way . It worked for Me
Contrary to popular belief, I CAN suspend disbelief. IF I were to try to bring reality into this, I would question how TWO people having an affair would both be afflicted by problems with snakes.
How is this sadistic? The pain caused by infidelity, betrayal and humiliation can have similar effects on a person's psyche.
Many men and women have fallen into despair, depression and suicide due to their spouse's wanton betrayal and humiliation.
What MC did was more than fair. Should be applied more often too.
All is fair in love and war! Even right up too the point that someday she slices your throat one night and starts screaming snake. You think she will go to prison? Nope, she's crazy remember!
I know a lady that goes crazy when the word snake is mentioned.
Snakes are far more afraid of me than I am of them.
RCD
Loved it. Hilarious. This is appropriate. I'm not joking or exaggerating. It pisses me off how lightly so many people treat the betrayal of infidelity. "Just sex", ha. People respond to infidelity similarly to how they respond to death. Why do so many people treat their vows so lightly. Life isn't a fucking game.
Inventive, cruel story. Driving a cheater (temporarily) mad is not really acceptable, but it is interesting as an idea.
Unfortunately, with unlawful imprisonment, and no mention of cleaning the bathroom after for any evidence of snakes, or mention of why Alex would not rat you out...
When she gets out and is served it finally dawns on her. She goes to the house when he is at work, hides in the bathroom when he comes in she stabs him repeatedly screaming snake snake snake. when the cops come and she is still screaming. They take her to the hospital where they keep her till she is set free. I mean she is crazy after all!
It's a fantastic story. A 2nd part with more dialogue and reactions would be amazing, like the reactions of friends and family, the asshat confronting Matt only to end up arrested, the cunt accusing Matt only to be made a laughing stock.
Some more psychological abuse of both turning their phobias into extreme paranoia, like tattooing a realistic snake on her arm.
Now that would be extremely satisfying, abusers getting abused.
Inventive way of dealing with the situation. Not very realistic and also very cruel. But then a cheater is also being cruel to the person they cheat on. A fair bit of humour as well. Overall a pretty decent read. BardnotBard
The cruelty was over the top, as was the humor. They balance out to Three stars for the tale.
JPB NOT BOB
I liked it, but I wish the moreandmore wrote"more". One can assume that his wife never recovered and was committed and that he got a healthy settlement for the company she worked for. It would have been nice if he pointed all that out. One can also assume that she recovered fully and found someone else and lived happily every after. I don't believe a cheater should get that. Still 5 stars
Nah, that was too cruel. He'll get over his hurt but she may never get over that.
Very inventive story but not so believable. Funny and maybe justified but still a ways over the top in burning the bitch. I still enjoyed reading the story just because it was funny.