All Comments on 'Doing My Best to Not Be a Problem'

Very inventive story but not so believable. Funny and maybe justified but still a ways over the top in burning the bitch. I still enjoyed reading the story just because it was funny.

Nah, that was too cruel. He'll get over his hurt but she may never get over that.

I liked it, but I wish the moreandmore wrote"more". One can assume that his wife never recovered and was committed and that he got a healthy settlement for the company she worked for. It would have been nice if he pointed all that out. One can also assume that she recovered fully and found someone else and lived happily every after. I don't believe a cheater should get that. Still 5 stars

The cruelty was over the top, as was the humor. They balance out to Three stars for the tale.

JPB NOT BOB

This is how I like my reconciliations.

Love it as always.

Inventive way of dealing with the situation. Not very realistic and also very cruel. But then a cheater is also being cruel to the person they cheat on. A fair bit of humour as well. Overall a pretty decent read. BardnotBard

It's a fantastic story. A 2nd part with more dialogue and reactions would be amazing, like the reactions of friends and family, the asshat confronting Matt only to end up arrested, the cunt accusing Matt only to be made a laughing stock.

Some more psychological abuse of both turning their phobias into extreme paranoia, like tattooing a realistic snake on her arm.

Now that would be extremely satisfying, abusers getting abused.

Haha silly story, very imaginative. Thanks for writing

When she gets out and is served it finally dawns on her. She goes to the house when he is at work, hides in the bathroom when he comes in she stabs him repeatedly screaming snake snake snake. when the cops come and she is still screaming. They take her to the hospital where they keep her till she is set free. I mean she is crazy after all!

Inventive, cruel story. Driving a cheater (temporarily) mad is not really acceptable, but it is interesting as an idea.

Unfortunately, with unlawful imprisonment, and no mention of cleaning the bathroom after for any evidence of snakes, or mention of why Alex would not rat you out...

Hilarious! 5*

Crazy. Creative but crazy.

🤣

Love it! He really BTB. Funny!

Very funny!

Ophidiophobia

So great but so short...

Loved it. Hilarious. This is appropriate. I'm not joking or exaggerating. It pisses me off how lightly so many people treat the betrayal of infidelity. "Just sex", ha. People respond to infidelity similarly to how they respond to death. Why do so many people treat their vows so lightly. Life isn't a fucking game.

Sickening.

I know a lady that goes crazy when the word snake is mentioned.

Snakes are far more afraid of me than I am of them.

RCD

All is fair in love and war! Even right up too the point that someday she slices your throat one night and starts screaming snake. You think she will go to prison? Nope, she's crazy remember!

What a fucking psycho

Awesome! Just beautiful!

How is this sadistic? The pain caused by infidelity, betrayal and humiliation can have similar effects on a person's psyche.

Many men and women have fallen into despair, depression and suicide due to their spouse's wanton betrayal and humiliation.

What MC did was more than fair. Should be applied more often too.

Contrary to popular belief, I CAN suspend disbelief. IF I were to try to bring reality into this, I would question how TWO people having an affair would both be afflicted by problems with snakes.

Not a fan of sadistic revenge stories. 3* because of being nicely written.

3 Stars as I thought the snakes were over kill . Just get Pictures and have fun that way . It worked for Me

got them good.

Great Story, Loved It!!

Creative but sad

not_a_viking must discriminate against snakes just because they got no fucking legs.

Nice and original

5* simple, but effective

That gave me a good chuckle.😈

Good fun!!!!

Well worth 5/5

That was BTB prime.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ good job! 👍 funny as hell.

not_a_viking_etc. Go read something else. I'm told that there are plenty of cuck stories somewhere.

The best fuckin you can give someone, is a mind-fuckin. Broken bones will heal, but mental scars will last a lifetime.

a little soft on the whore , but to each his own .

Hilarious story, loved it

not_a_viking is a Will Smith!

How interesting; using aversion therapy alter a person's bad habits. Cruel? Somewhat, but it did seem to be most effective.

Love a good BTB!!! 5 Stars!!!

Viking is a wimpy cuckold!

shit nothing disgusting here viking

Honestly disgusting. I'm all for a cheating wife getting her comeuppance, but this was just simply torture.

I mean i get it, it's fiction, but come on.

Positively delightful.

3 stars - interesting plot and yes, way over the top.

Different BUT not nice LOL (jaybee186)

I think this in the Slytherin playbook

Brilliant! Hilarious! Beautifully scripted, well-crafted, deliciously OTT, with just the right `hint-of-psychotic malice'! Very well done, a real work of art, thank you,

Richard.

Hilarious. Loved it.

Some of the commenters here just don't seem to get it. This is *fiction* and not the author's diary. So it's over the top, so what?

Good story. Evil, but still good.

Wow that's not a burn, that's a freakin flame thrower!

"Burning the Bitch" is one thing. Sadistic cruelty is something else altogether. You went too far.

I love your psychological BTB stories!!!!

LOL you snake in the grass

As lots of your stories, echoes of Harddsysknight. Major props to you for your creativity, wit (Okay, twisted sense of humor), and playfulness with words.

snakes, like em, admire them, see one got to catch it and count coup. mostly deal w/ adults, tried to count coup on a juvenile, big mistake, much more flexible, if you can imagine, and it got me w/ one fang, finger isnt quite 100% the same but I fooled around and paid the price. dont hate the snake, bought a profssional snake grabber, still chase after them. caviat, ran into a cottonmouth, 5-6 ft long, 6in wide maybe 8, left him alone. I wouldnt fuck w/ an alligator longer than 3 feet, my admiration and need dont often overule common sense. people know to call me to relocate snakes vs killing them. a critic wrote that the husband was cruel to punish using snakes, how odd, didnt seem to feel much about her cheating on husband, well damn me, it was her right? to use her body as she saw fit? I was thinking that he should have said , "I'll take the snakes out if you promise to sign the divorce papers asap.If she broke that promise also, well then she could meet a poisonous snake too, like boyfriend.

Awful! There are two things that terrify.me beyond all reason. One is any snake. The other is the knowledge that Kampala Harris will be President when Uncle Squint is article 25ed.

Excellent, I never stopped smiling⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Even with the some of the issues in the story it was still fun. Mean, and rather sadistic but kinda fun in a creepy icky way.

That was quite the BTB.

But I do think it was too extreme and sadistic.

I think it was the husband who mentally "snapped" and needs a psychiatric therapy, not the wife.

I do wish there was some details about the wife after she gets out of hospital.

Thanks to the author for sharing his effort.

I think the police would have been able to get forensic evidence of the snakes being in the bathroom. Putting a venomous snake in the boyfriends car, was also a bad idea. Beyond that, I thought it was an interesting take on a BTB.

Still gave it 5 stars, for his ability to take down a smug, self assured cheater.

This is my favorite story on the site.

Great as usual, to bad it was his hand that got bit.

Thanks for your originality, fresh plot and great writing. You are a pleasure to read.

Keep 'em comin'.

I believe M&M is the only author on Lit who makes me laugh out loud. Thanks for another hilarious story. Tanglosax

Forgot how mean it was. 5 *

Like to see jj69's views if HE ever went thru a cheating spouse! Nice little story but I will admit, snakes kind of make MY skin crawl

Just read this again loved it. Thanks.

what a great flash story. it's hilarious to see the cucks come out and defend Dora though.

this is how BTB should be.

A little too BTB for me. This was above and beyond revenge and just plain mean to the extreme. I sympathize with Dora, this was more retribution than she deserved.

now he spends the rest of his life looking over his shoulder for the now crazy dora

I bet when he was finished with her she didn't have a pit to hiss in.

I love the story, but I ain't playing no snakes. I hate damn snakes.

Couldn't resist

Funny story

That was fun! Great job!

Another chuckle resulted from the Anony comment 11/07/19 - trouser snake. Too much.

Love the BTB scorched Earth humor!!!

Omg you stories have some whit and subtle humor in them, very well done on this one. More please.

tHIS WAS great... DeKre you have no SENSE OF HUMOR! I THINK IT WAS very kind of hubby to use non-venomous snakes. I wonder if I could have been so generous and charitable in the same position! Great story well told 5***** The anonymous commenters MISSED THE POINT!

Who gives a rat's ass what the snake was? It was a snake, it's fiction, the snake could have been a cottonheadedcoppermouthrattlemamba and it wouldn't keep it from being a a good story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Yet I found it oddly funny. Guess that makes me like the author?

His are downright deplorable and dangerous. One examination of the door from the police would also have him in jail for false imprisonment and terrorism. Not to mention assault with the intention to cause bodily harm at best for the poisonous snake in the asshats car. I doubt his friend would take the blame for his snakes causing the harm. Creative? Possibly but unrealistic he'd not be caught and arrested. He deserves his own comeuppance.

Really? Killing cheating wives is okay with you, but not two days with snakes? Sending them to Mexican whore houses is a-ok with you? This is so tame compared to those permanent solutions. I wish there was a way to give more that five stars because this one deserves it!

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A pity there is no way to give less than one star. This is just plain evil. I actually like most of your stories, but this goes too far. I know , having a phobia like this is silly, but that doesn't make it less real for the person involved. You can actually drive somebody to real madness this way.

Very original and a lot of fun. However, not anacondas. You probably mean boas. Anacondas really are very nasty beasts that attack and bite humans with little or no provocation. Boas are relatively hand tame.

Trouser snakes.

I suspect she'll be wary for quite some time.

Very good. Really didn't so any harm to her but worked on her fears.. Not done though,needs a follow up

Respect. Put in your thumb and pulled out a plum moreandmore. Very difficult to create an original story line. 5 stars.

moreandmore

Thank you for having the motivation to come up with one of the most original plot lines I have read for a mighty long time. I gotta tell you truthfully that snakes are really not my favourite critters. But by the end of your tale I was actually cheering for them and the hubby. As for BTB....fuck yeah!!!!

The story was great! Very creative and an original idea.

The smug comments from anon about the husband doing jail time were hilarious.

Yeah, as if the police would send a forensics team to investigate the ravings of a mad woman! Besides, she was sedated and in a straight jacket... by the time she managed to convince the doctors that she hadn't had a psychotic break, the husband would have had plenty of time to gut the bathroom and install a new one. She trashed the place remember?

Laughing so hard i pee'd my pants!

So much fun reading these little gems. A very clever little story that I can only describe as a 'playful' BTB story. Not for the wife of course. A nod and a tip of the hat to moreandmore. *****

If you yank on a tigers' tail ya better have a plan for the teeth and claws. A different plot twist for revenge, this one was fun to read. Signed: BTW.

You come up with some really far.out revenge plots. This was a good.one. Snakes are one thing that give.me the shakes too.

Good

Keep them coming