by EmmyLou93
For leaving me hanging like this. Where is the hand cream damn you.
I absolutely love med exam stories, so I can't wait until daddy gets her in the stirrups.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter. It would be nice for the Dad Doctor sniffs his daughter's pussy while she examines her. Inhaling her musky, feminine virgin pussy scent.
Definitely kept it interesting - great writing...story flows wonderfully. Would love to see where it goes from here - nicely done with leaving us hanging and wanting more more more! Fabulous job!
I like the idea and you tell it in a way that makes it feel realistic. I like your writing style, good flow and pace.
I don't like that Penny is written to look so child-like. That makes it an uncomfortable read for me and spoils my enjoyment of the story. You could do something really interesting with future chapters and explore that aspect of your protag in a mature way but I suspect that wouldn't really be possible or appreciated here.
You're good, you're smart, you have real talent, and you write well. Your bio tells us you are very young. So I want to encourage you to keep at it. Don't let anyone dissuade you.
I am enjoying the build-up in the story. You've included a nice collection of details and the story moves along at a good pace. Keep up the great work.
Well written and hot! I liked the build up!
sheesh...!
like teacher/student taboo...so verboten, and yet...can't look away.
curious to see how you spin this out...she is over 18 now, Lit's BIG concern...
and Laura interesting aside...
But I agree with another reader that Penny should be describe so child-like which unnecessarily pushes the story into the ralm of child abuse and gives it a bad taste.