All Comments on 'Dr. Frank's Newest Patient'
by EmmyLou93
- 19 Comments
Anonymous8 months agoBut I agree with another reader that Penny should be describe so child-like which unnecessarily pushes the story into the ralm of child abuse and gives it a bad taste.
roveronealmost 2 years agosheesh...!
like teacher/student taboo...so verboten, and yet...can't look away.
curious to see how you spin this out...she is over 18 now, Lit's BIG concern...
and Laura interesting aside...
Grower59over 5 years agoWell written and hot! I liked the build up!
Anonymousover 7 years agoI am enjoying the build-up in the story. You've included a nice collection of details and the story moves along at a good pace. Keep up the great work.
Anonymousover 7 years agoYou're good, you're smart, you have real talent, and you write well. Your bio tells us you are very young. So I want to encourage you to keep at it. Don't let anyone dissuade you.
Scandiloveover 7 years agoI like the idea and you tell it in a way that makes it feel realistic. I like your writing style, good flow and pace.
I don't like that Penny is written to look so child-like. That makes it an uncomfortable read for me and spoils my enjoyment of the story. You could do something really interesting with future chapters and explore that aspect of your protag in a mature way but I suspect that wouldn't really be possible or appreciated here.
Anonymousover 7 years agoDefinitely kept it interesting - great writing...story flows wonderfully. Would love to see where it goes from here - nicely done with leaving us hanging and wanting more more more! Fabulous job!
rodavover 7 years agoI'll be waiting for the next chapter. It would be nice for the Dad Doctor sniffs his daughter's pussy while she examines her. Inhaling her musky, feminine virgin pussy scent.
peebudyover 7 years agoI absolutely love med exam stories, so I can't wait until daddy gets her in the stirrups.
live4thebjover 7 years agoFor leaving me hanging like this. Where is the hand cream damn you.
