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Click hereYes, this is stupid shit.
If you want a perfect story go find one written by Mr. Data.
And, yes, I suck.
Go have yourself a warm and fuzzy day.
BTW, you only get to comment on spelling and grammar if you are volunteering to be an editor. Those comments and rants will be deleted, you've been warned.
AND DON'T FORGET TO VOTE!
Well, 4 Chapters and 4 5 BIG FAT STAR ratings! I love this story and think that you are and exceptional Author. The only thing I find unusual is the use of the dot dot dots. You read too many Literotica stories I suppose, lol. When at my first Editoing job, My PA was told my requirements to pass anything to my desk, it had to pass hers and that meant any of the punctuation like at Literotica had better not be on any manuscripts or she was getting a spanking and it amazed me how often one showed up on my desk. She loved her spankings, lol. She loved everything I gave her, lol! Thank you again acup for an excellent story! Peace.
It's August of 2021 as I type this out. I'm sure the author had no idea how much the world would change since the writing of this story and what has transpired in the last two years. America is still exceptional. But that idea, the idea of limited government, the idea of personal liberty, and that brave idea that a man or woman should be free to pursue their own happiness is under assault unlike any that had come before. I pray that we Americans can hold the line. That we remember E Pluribus Unum, out of many, one. I appreciate Cathleen, and her story. It has been my privilege to know and serve with many immigrants, and I have heard their despair as they watch in sadness and horror as American slips closer to the abyss that has consumed so many of their birth nations. Thank you for your excellent work.
Yes it too Dan short!!!!! Lol. Great story.
Coming, as I do, from the country whose biggest literary export of the past several decades was a series of books about a small, slim, nipple-pierced girl with a dragon tattoo, I know which way I have been expecting this story to go ever since I first read the title and saw that the lead character was into "doodling"!
Not spoilin' mind you, just wishin'!