All Comments on 'Erica's Return'

by MrHenry

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aennialaaennialaalmost 6 years ago
You need to correct your text.

So ypur sister as a cok!!!!!

MrHenryMrHenryalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Aenniala

Could you be more specific? I do appreciate critique, but I'm not sure what part of the story you are talking about. There is no mention of a sister in this story. If you could tell me where the problem is, I would be more than happy to make sure I didn't make that mistake in the future. Thank you so much for reading my story. I wish you a very happy day.

RoedlerRoedlerabout 2 years ago

I really liked this story and wanted to say thank you for writing it :)

Have a nice day!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I really liked the story, a little confused about how Carla having sex with them individually was wrong(def get how deadnaming and upsetting Erica was wrong though obviously) but I'm happy for them.

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I am a 56 year old DWM. I love writing and hope you enjoy my stories. All feedback and comments are welcome, so let me know what you think.