All Comments on 'Erica's Return'

I really liked the story, a little confused about how Carla having sex with them individually was wrong(def get how deadnaming and upsetting Erica was wrong though obviously) but I'm happy for them.

I really liked this story and wanted to say thank you for writing it :)

Have a nice day!

Could you be more specific? I do appreciate critique, but I'm not sure what part of the story you are talking about. There is no mention of a sister in this story. If you could tell me where the problem is, I would be more than happy to make sure I didn't make that mistake in the future. Thank you so much for reading my story. I wish you a very happy day.

So ypur sister as a cok!!!!!