All Comments on 'Étiennette'

This is really a wonderful story. Very well written, touching, fully believable. Keep up the great work!

You present a very believable first person character, and a very believable situation. I'd have personally preferred more character development and more insight into Étiennette's feelings and motives - but then, my stories tend not to be very popular with the Literotica audience because they don't have enough sex, so you probably got the balance about right.

Oh, did I mention that it's very hot? It's /very/ hot. Congratulations.

More like this would be great.

This was a very good story; shame you haven't written more.

Good story, great that your daughter went along with her friend and you having sex and even setting it up.

A very loving and tender story. It was very enjoyable.

Beautifully crafted story with a conclusion that lifted my spirits. So many stories on here have awkward, clumsy endings.

Great story!! Even though I don't like the ending, it is a beautiful love story. I wish there was more that further explored the relationship with the main characters