All Comments on 'Exposure'

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 17 years ago
Great little fantasy!

This is a great little fantasy! I really enjoyed it!

Keep up the great work!

skip.69skip.69over 17 years ago
So did I

I know W.A., so tell me where you lie sunbathng, please, and next time I am in WA I can perhaps enjoy a different view from that of the beach. Lovely, simple story. Well done.

c_nonomousc_nonomousover 17 years ago
Hot!

Very hot story - thanks!

Your1GuyYour1Guyover 17 years ago
You just keep getting better

Your stories have that delicious mixture of reality and fantasy. Obviously you write from experience. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wow

wow that was so real,yet filled with fantasy,really got me going!!!

amsterdamamsterdamover 8 years ago
Fab!

Loved the ending - excellent story. Some lovely humour, felt very real with wonderful expressions of the protagonists conflicting emotions. Glad the lust won out!

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