by pagangirl
Loved the ending - excellent story. Some lovely humour, felt very real with wonderful expressions of the protagonists conflicting emotions. Glad the lust won out!
Your stories have that delicious mixture of reality and fantasy. Obviously you write from experience. Keep up the good work.
I know W.A., so tell me where you lie sunbathng, please, and next time I am in WA I can perhaps enjoy a different view from that of the beach. Lovely, simple story. Well done.
This is a great little fantasy! I really enjoyed it!
Keep up the great work!