by tantrik721
Such a great story represents the Indian culture. Disgusting and depraved.
"Today she was wearing an extremely low cut blouse which was making a juicy cleavage and leaving a large part of her back naked. The Saree was draped tightly around her curvaceous body and was worn much below the navel"
Awesome description of Kavita's attire...love these small details which ordinary authors miss these days....love your work,exceedingly good and keeps us readers taut and scorching...rated this 5 stars !
Always make your heroines wear the lowest saree possible with skimpiest of blouses...too good
You are a awesome writer . First of all provide the next part as early as possible.please please please....
Create situations where Kavita and Narang going outside together to pub and disco in front of Neha where Kavita is wearing sexy clothes. Create situation where Ravi and family go the marriage together . From there Narang Takes Kavita to her house.Create sitaution where kavita and narang goes 2-3 days holiday togehter.
plsss keep rocking our dicks .
Please written another part as soon as possible. And another part please include neha's sex story kavita neha threesome's Narang or Riyan.
Nice going.. indulge more father daughter subtle humiliation.Let neighbours or know people smell that something is fishy with these couple..Ravi should have proper creampies and daughter watching it secretly will be heights.. go ahead rock it..
Nice story thread. And real deep conversations.
Now that Kavita accepted Ravi as her cuckold;
plz make them indulge in creamiepie.
Husband eating wife's holes soaked in her lover's cums would be real humiliating.
And can't imagine what if daughter Neha comes to know about it.
Eagerly waiting for the next parts. Plz post them fast.
I liked it ...the conversation between neha and her father and how she was talking so openly with him....make it lenghtier and more father daughter conversations....and abuses plz
AND STILL YOU'RE READING THIS SOTY. BONNIE IS RIGHT YOU ARE DESTORYING THIS SITE AND ARE A COMPLETE ASS WIPE. YOU SHOULD BE BANNED.
Tantrik Chapter 6 was the worst among he all 6 chapters. Pls. slow the speed and describe Kavitha and Neha in detail specially with sexy clothes.Create situation of Little hints to the neighbours and known people including Father in Law. Some cock teasign coneration between Kavita and Ravi etc.
And next chapter should be as early as possible as this chapter ruined everything
story is moving good but why chapters are getting smaller?/////
I have read many cuckold indian stories but it's rare to find real conversation between characters in those rare and tough situations. so far story is very good. always conversations between two open minds are interesting. bringing their daughter into the scene and with her matured mind, can't wait to see what you have in mind for future. now plot seems more thick and it could extend much further as long as you stick to their roles characters. hope to see you more from you.
Did you bother to proof read this drivel? You claim to have used an editor. Did the editor not suggest to you that you might want to reconsider posting this mess? The characters horrible people. Disgusting attempt at story telling. 1 star.
This kind of stories designed to Indian should be written in their native language and so save us from reading them...1*