All Comments on 'Father, Forgive Me Ch. 04'

Gimmie gimmie more yummy story! W-O-W!! ♡♡♡

You are forgiven... Forgive me? lol Loved it.

Apart from the baby nonsense that is.

More daddy, more!

BUT DON'T STOP! Lets see more! Great story!

Thanks! Please write more...

Baby making is never nonsense. Making a decision to bring forth life is never nonsense - even in a fictional story. It is never logical, it is a highly charged emotional decision between two people.

Romantic and sinful. But I could feel their passion. Real passion is rare. Please keep catching and describing that.

That this could be a good stopping point, but why would you? So much more story here!

I love the slow build up from the other 3 chapters. It made this one really intense.

I read only part four. Great story, well written. Near the end you used the word "neck" three times in one paragraph. Don't. You should have found three different words to say the same thing.

Loved it. It so erotic. I loved the presentation of guilt. Very well depicted the feelings of desire with feelings of guilt. Very few incest stories I have read here which justifies the associated guilt with the burning desire for each other. In my opinion it is a good end here.Short and sweet. Good job.

Wish it were a few chapters longer

The baby business is unnecessary, silly, and takes away from the rest of the story,

This author has no idea where the hymen is actually located. That explains a lot.

Loved how she begged for daddy