All Comments on 'Father, Forgive Me Ch. 04'
by Aibhilin
- 16 Comments
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis author has no idea where the hymen is actually located. That explains a lot.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThe baby business is unnecessary, silly, and takes away from the rest of the story,
Professorlondiabazabout 6 years agoLoved it. It so erotic. I loved the presentation of guilt. Very well depicted the feelings of desire with feelings of guilt. Very few incest stories I have read here which justifies the associated guilt with the burning desire for each other. In my opinion it is a good end here.Short and sweet. Good job.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI read only part four. Great story, well written. Near the end you used the word "neck" three times in one paragraph. Don't. You should have found three different words to say the same thing.
NyQuilSmuggerover 6 years agoI love the slow build up from the other 3 chapters. It made this one really intense.
ramonbrookabout 7 years agoThat this could be a good stopping point, but why would you? So much more story here!
TrillySlutabout 7 years agoRomantic and sinful. But I could feel their passion. Real passion is rare. Please keep catching and describing that.
SamWarrensover 7 years agoBaby making is never nonsense. Making a decision to bring forth life is never nonsense - even in a fictional story. It is never logical, it is a highly charged emotional decision between two people.
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