All Comments on 'Filing Isn't Necessarily Boring'

by marriedbuthoping

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asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Not bad, but...

Doesn't match the standard of your others!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Were we reading the same story?

I was so surprised by the comments I went back and reread the story... and I still don't get it. It's a perfectly nice straightforward male fantasy story, better written and better spelled than at least half the stuff on this site.

Yes, it's not great literature. Yes, it would be a better with a little more build up. But it's a reasonably well executed mainstream stroke piece. I don't understand the venom. 'Go away please and don't come back'? What on earth is that about?

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Good, but could be better

A very erotic fantasy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Spellcheck

One word -spellcheck

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Crap

Wonder what motivated the writer to waste readers time with this rubbish? Unbelievably awful, no build-up, no context, even fantasy needs some grip on reality.

Now go away please and don't come back.

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Was a Married guy now separated that loves sexy erotic stories...many many fantasies....would love to make some come true