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My orgasm made my pussy ripple around his cock which pushed him over the edge and he began shooting ropes after ropes of cum into my warm body. Soon we both were spent and hugged each other for dear life.
He slid down beside me and took few deep breaths. I was still in a state of trance and his kiss brought me back. He was still panting and he embraced me as writhed. I calmed down and looked at him. He was smiling at me and I gave him a smile of my own.
"Was it good?" he asked, with a questioning look on his face.
"Can't you tell?" I said between my breaths.
"I don't know. I'm a Fool." He shrugged.
I slid over his body and stared down into his eyes.
"You are my Fool."
The End.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI know you are from India and I assume that English is not your primary language. To make this story work better, several things need to be done.
Try to use one tense for the entire story. In one paragraph you used both present and past tense.
Spelling is another issue. This needs to be worked on.
In order to make the best story I strongly recommend you use an editor. Good luck.
DestinyReaderabout 7 years agoDeveloped very well and I could feel Kevin's pain after the "prank" happened. Hope to see more stories from you.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYou could probably add another chapter? Anyways sad that it got over .
