All Comments on 'For the Greater Good: Continued'

Sry but .... what a nonsense!!! Cheating for the greater good ... Sounds like someone tries to give the cuck fetish a good vibe ...

Like most of your stories you are completely full of shit in this one. All cheaters cheat for the same reason, because they want to. Any other excuse or justification is just pure bullshit. She cheated, because she wanted to, and the stupid weak cuckold took her back. Now she has a license to cheat any time she gets “stuck”. George please stop writing and tend to that vagina between your legs.

Good old George. An angry man hating bitch who writes under a male pseudonym. He has never met a cheating wife he didn’t love or a husband he wouldn’t emasculate. One star for more of your usual trash.

fantastic 5stars

That's ridiculous. They're having this marital crisis and the conversation goes if he doesn't go fuck her, she'll "have to find someone there".

Meh, good writer in sense of putting words together, but this dog's breakfast is very weak. He is stuck with the premise of the original story: genius wife can only get by mental roadblocks in her work by getting fucked by someone and hubby had been her go-to partner since college. Dumb premise, but if you accept it, then hubby at least knows there is something to the idea that she needed someone to fuck her to get by a roadblock. But it breaks down as more detail emerges. She understood that she needed the magic fucking cure on Wednesday, but thought about fucking Chad until Thursday, when she chose to fuck her work partner to whom she admittedly was attracted per the original story. For the 24 hours, she was thinking about whether to fuck Chad, why didn't she think about hubby who was 3 hours away, especially since she knew sex with hubby ALWAYS had been the sure-fire cure to a mental roadbock? If Chad's fucking hadn't cured the roadblock, who was next on her fuck-cure list? It's got to be "Go to hubby because he's always worked in the past." The only rational answer, no matter how she spins it is that she wanted to try Chad out.

But she doesn't stop there. Having fucked Chad once and liked it she hit 3 more "roadblocks." Again according to thethe lab director, John, said there had been three previous occasions when she had fucked Chad, original story, the time hubby came up to visit and saw her fucking Chad, was number four. Sheeven admits in this version she thought, "Well, I fucked Chad once so no big deal if I fuck him again, because he is right here and of course, 'it's for the greater good'." This is where for hubby it would become a possibly forgivable, though unforgettable, lapse to an unforgivable breach of trust. Sne fucked Chad another three separate times and her spin on it is just not believable. She did it again because she liked it and she didn't call hubby because then she wouldn't get to fuck Chad again.

Anyway this is way too long so the conclusion, this is way beyond the forgivable. Reconciliation just doesn't work and it's compounded by how weak hubby seems. He is drawn as a strong character in original story but he turns into a handwringing bitch. Just end it; there is a very good chance she will cheat again because she is capable of justifying it in her own mind because she is doing it for the greater good, it is just sex, it doesn't mean anything, etc, etc, etc. Why stretch to these lengths to reconcile. It will haunt him for the rest of his life and she is very likely to do it again. 2 ** because it is above average writing but otherwise just a thoroughly unlikable story.

ALL BULL SHIT!

Absolute dog shit

Good story as an addition to the others of this tale. Glad that no one died in this. Thanks GA. LP

A genius shouldn't to be told her husband should have been consulted. On the other hand she saved his brother..... I think I change my vote to 4/5 mainly for the dilemma Kurt was presented, not that I agree with her explanation of her actions.

Agree with what she did, not calling him

It put a strain on an otherwise good marriage.

This is a continuation story. For someone who was supposedly so smart, why would she not call her husband. Finding a drug cure takes a lot of time and work. Even in the fantasy that she saves Tom, it doesn't come down to the deadline of hours. Utter bullshit.

The author did what he could with a story with a weird premise but ill-suited to reconciliation. Hence there are so many unbelievable mistakes. Her turning off her phone for 24 hours while she debated what to do, when she could have called hubby, he would have driven 3 hours, fucked her quick and drove back. Do you think he cares about a bad night's sleep to save their marriage? Then the second and third times, she does talk to him, but has already decided to use Chad to relieve the blocks, without hubby knowing a damn thing. Of course he finds them on the 3rd time, since he can tell something is off. Heck why couldn't she say after or before the first time, she is at a critical juncture and needs him nearby. It is his brother's life at stake. So take leave from work, they know about Tom dying, and move near RCA as they are not hurting for money. Husband dropped the ball on that. Also like she said, at least have a system set up beforehand of what to do if she hits a block. Like send a text saying "I need you stat". Instead she turns off her phone and wastes 24 hours agonizing over her philosophical choice, without calling her husband. And then makes up a bunch of crap on that first cheating call, explaining away how she got past the block. Is husband an idiot now? It might have been different if he were on the other side of the country. He wasn't. Just three hours drive. Wtf? The spaceship mentality is retarded. Swing and a miss by the author desperate for a reconciliation. I think the day with her phone off is the real problem and was inherited from the original story. Should have been more that she panicked when hitting the block and made a bad choice. Her compartmentalization of "work" problem, so use only work resources and not encroach on personal time is weak. She did it once and thought she could do it as often as needed to get through to saving Tom. Why she didn't talk to hubby after the first time about a plan for future blocks is also befuddling. Btw was the "three times" inherited from the original? Too lazy to check. Read it a long time ago. Also really would ANY husband NOT confront them when he saw them screwing? Regardless of what John said? So yeah Ashley is remorseful she did not call him. She is really sorry about what amounted to a colossal brain fart. She was under a lot of stress and 70 hour weeks. But why the 24 hour incommunicado while she makes her fateful choice? That is where it falls apart. Is a reconciliation warranted based on she and the MC feel about each other and hoew clinical the sex was and the crazy circumstance? Umm maybe. Even probably. But would there actually BE a reconciliation? Seems unlikely given her real shitty decisions, the lies of omission, and what he husband saw as she enjoyed the "clinical sex". If he could see into her brain telepathically, yeah reconcile. But he can't, and the enormity of her stupid decisions, magnified by turning off her phone for 24 hours while she mulled things over (really inexcusable), as opposed to a quick panic "fuck me" then regret, makes it seem implausible. Maybe they divorce and get back someday to being friends with benefits. Just seems all crazy. Oh and finally: why can't she use a vibrator or dildo or both to get off? Masturbation?? None of those work to solve the block? She is a scientist and would test all of those. What about phone sex + video and her playing with a vibrator while hubby jacked off and talked raunchy? She is a scientist with a weird affliction. In their marriage they would have tried all those things. Of course the original story was just about a premise and nothing more so inherited logical disconnects. Crazy read.

For an act that meant nothing, she fucked asswipe Beltran 3 times. He watched the third time and she was into it pretty well. She's a genius researcher, but also a whore that thinks with her pissy...

A 5/5 effort for so many reasons!

I read through each suggested ending to the original story. To my surprise, the lowest rated, this story was by far the best.

hate the thought that I could ever be married to a cheater. So far, after 50+ ears of married life, and 3 years of married life, I only encountered one instance and I was not the one cheated on, but was the target of the cheater. I got out of that relationship unscathed. Yet the concept as oft been on my mind because of other life incidents that are parallel.

Strangely, many readers at Literotica seem to have a very strong moral compass, and believe cheating must be punished.

One they usually lack is an understanding of totally unselfish love. In this story, though not discussed directly GA gives an example of people who can take the worst bumps on life's road, learn and grow, and more on for the benefit of both.

THC

Puzzled. I've read one or two of the other endings, and this one differs.

In this version, was there a fourth hookup on the morning she drove back? That seemed to be the final blow in the other versions.

Honestly, GA is about the biggest, stinkiest pussy excuse for a man I think I've ever even heard of despite having writing talent.

Honestly, GA is about the biggest, stinkiest pussy excuse for a man I think I've ever even heard of despite having writing talent.

There is no way the MC could reconcile with Ashley without first having an equal number of extramarital sexual encounters as Ashley did with Beltran. He would need these trysts in order to overcome the mental block he encountered in their marriage as a result of her infidelity. The genius slut would not be able to object to this solution for him to overcome the same obstacle that supposedly lead her to fuck Beltran multiple times. What's good for the goose is good for the gander.

Another GA cuck husband. The original premise of the story was absurd in several respects. Writing another cuckout ending makes it worse.

Wow, quite a group of misogynists in the comments group here. Sad that emotions aren't tempered by some

consideration of how the story went. Still, 3 at most.

George Anderson has never encountered a cheating cunt that he wouldn’t eat the sperm out of. Probably the gayest author in the LW section. This is one star shit like every other story he has written.

@Norcal62

More like us real men are fed up with you beta bitches tarnishing the entire gender. You wanna be disrespected, emasculated, and laughed at? By all means, but don't expect us to give you accolades for your short comings...

Stupid premises, inane rationalizations...all in the service of a moronic raac. Just another cuck story buried in distracting odd claims and grossly defective reasoning. TypicalGA.

"Besides, it looked like you'd chosen Beltran over me anyway."

She was aghast. "Kurt, you must know I would never do anything like that. I love you too much, we have too much together..."

For gads sake, she just did. This slut will do it again. She even said next time they would discuss it??? Don't know why I gave it two stars. What happened to the farewell tryst with Chad??

What a waste of a life for the husband. She cheated for the greater good (whatever the hell that means!) and expects hubby to forgive and forget. Why should he? She pull some lame excuse for cheating out of her butt and expects husband to say ok.

Depend on wife cheating again and often. Husband needs to cut his losses, see a lawyer and get out of this poisonous marriage.

I find it surprising the MC and Beltran's wife do not even discuss the possibility of a revenge fuck. The author's odd views on relationships notwithstanding, there would have to be some effort to restore parity in the marriage if they were to have a future together.

I just don't understand why some readers make disparaging remarks about the author. As they say 'the views inscribed here are not necessarily those of the author' Reviewers should remark on the story and not on the poor writer.

Oh yea got that right, nice go at this story

The MC and Chad's wife should hook up for some revenge sex to make everything even! Only after an equal number of fucks would it be OK. Spouses don't get a say! LOL 5 Stars Great Story and Great Writing. Buster2U

I can MAYBE understand the FIRST time not thinking of calling Kurt, but after the fact she MUST have realized what she had done, and made arrangements with her boss to contact Kurt the next time it happened.

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"The choice I made between Tom's life and staying faithful?" - That's a false choice. She could have saved Tom's life AND stayed faithful if she had only called Kurt, and either gone home, had him come, or meet halfway.

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"I do think that given the options I saw" - Maybe it was only sub-consciously, but she obviously chose not to see the third option.

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It's actually harder for Mindy Beltran than for Kurt. Kurt can at least understand that Ashley WAS doing it for the greater good, as mis-guided as she might have been. But Chad didn't NEED to do it, there was the intern, maybe not married, Chad WANTED to do it, even though he'd be cheating.

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"If I had thought of it, we would have talked about it, and agreed on what I would do." - Again, that MIGHT have excused the first time, but after the first time, why DIDN'T she think of it?

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I GRUDGINGLY come down on the side of them staying together, but for Kurt's sake, not hers. Kurt loves the stupid bitch (yes, I know, she's a genius, but she made a stupid decision with Chad), and she's the best piece of ass as he's ever likely to get. I know I've hashed and re-hashed the many ways she fucked up, but if I were to come down on the side of dumping her, it would be because she didn't smack herself in the head after the first time and realize that she should have called Kurt, and told John to remind her next time. Of course then we'd have no story!

I see all the negative comments, but I still award Five Stars for a tale well told.

JPB

Contrary to some of the critics, Mr. A has tackled a subject that has an appreciable degree of significance and he has done it well. I have read many of the comments, although not all. None I read challenged his story premise: that sex can release creativity. The fact is that it can. I have found that to be true as a writer (although not on this platform). I have read that it can also be true in other areas, including science. So he (GA) writes about a subject that pretty much no one else does. The story is important for that reason alone. As to whether Ashley could have found better ways to unlock the hidden powers in her brain, she probably could have. Unfortunately, we deal with problems in the moment and only learn from our actions after the event. They saved Tom's life and those of many others. That is possible in real life and I suspect that something like GA's story really, although rarely, happens. When it does, cut 'em some slack. It's their lives and it is obvious they were trying to do good. Someone really ought to invent a pill for the LW critics that will open their minds. But then the scientists working on the project might have to screw each other.

Typical GA cuck ending.

‘I want us to survive this together, and I'll do anything I can to make it happen. I love you, Kurt."

Anything Ashely? OK, you’re the genius you find the way to fix this. You find the magic that will erase the image burned in my brain of you fucking that turd. You find a way to end my pain.

You confess to Chad’s wife and convince her that since Chad cuckolded me Chad’s wife should cuckold Chad with me. Ashley, you won’t mind us just having a little sex would you? For the greater good of all concerned of course. What's good for the goose is sometimes even better for the gander.

Ashley the whole family thinks you’re a hero. I can’t be around my family without them knowing what you did. If Ashley had any decency she would have admitted it to everyone, including Tom. But no, Kurt is expected to bury his pride, his fragile male ego, his pain and hurt, so Ashley can go on being the hero. And of course her going on being a slut.

pitiful end to a pitiful story about a genius wife too stupid to think about her vows, her husband and his pain.

Yeah I got to say I’m disappointed, the author was just trying to come up with anything to justify the cheating so the MC could forgive her, the whole premise this story is based on and for it to be believed is for us readers to be morons⭐️⭐️

The original story proceeded from stupid premises, and this continuation preserves the stupidity. The husband is written as a simp/ cuck who buys each of the slut's ridiculous rationalizations. This GA at his subtle fem/dom worst. A principled man would thank Ashley for her research and divorce her for her gratuitous adultery.

So the other wife does not divorce? There were plenty of men around to screw the cheater. That is what she should have said and hen divorced the guy. The MC is a wimp and should divorce the cheater and take the cash he will get. She will be loaded now that she has the cure. If no divorce then just use her as a sugar daddy and he can get some lovers on the side as well.

This was an exceptional CUCK story...

Ashley is a fucking whore, marry her and you marry a fucking whore! She will ALWAYS fuck around when ever when ever she can. All she needs is another excuse. Fuck Her the slimey cunt!

Just so you know, there are PLENTY of beautiful women out there that won't cheat on you. Ashley is beautiful but is also a confirmed whore, and Cheater. She will absolutely cheat again with any other flimsy excuse she thinks she can use. I threw one of the most beautiful women out, I have ever known, when she gave me the crabs. It hurt for awhile but at least I traded up for another women that wasn't a confirmed cheater. Jus saying. Once a cheater always a cheater, they say.

This story assumes a lot of dumb decisions from a supposedly smart woman. Also, not so sure the man is all that smart either. It wasn't a decision to cheat or to save his brothers life, way too many other options available and still achieve desired result.

One of the better endings for this tale.

People acting link people. None of other version of "Whoe is Me".

Thanks., 5*

Mr Anderson, quick question…. Did this dilemma story the preverbal snowball in your head that started us towards the February Sucks Avalanche?

Fantastic ending!!!! Congratulations master GeorgeAnderson!!

Really buster2u? You're the pot calling the kettle BLACK aren't you? The women purported to be wives in your stories are 1,000 times more debased! Shoot, the most virtuous wife in your universe of writing would be married to a white guy but living with her black pimp during the week and taking on 30 car trains over the weekends. And all the while they profess their love for their cuckold husbands when they go back home to visit their black love children who are being watched over by their white step daddy.

A whore? No Ashley is not, nothing in the relationship of Ashley and her husband would suggest that. Cheated? Yes she did, and in the story she exhibits real remorse and grief over her bad judgment. As an intellectual Ashley tries to use logic and information to solve problems but she realized she messed up by misapplying logic in her decision to use an available team member. She owned up to her error and sought forgiveness AND her husband's assistance to help get her past her next roadblock. THIS is a LOVING WIFE story.

@MarkT63 written by an exeptionally cucky author.

Pathetic! - Total terminal nuclear implosion disappearing into it's own self-generated singularity!

Only noteworthy for it's depth of deceit, as this sordid saga so persisted in it's endless assault on misdirecting our attention in the opposite direction to it's ultimate destination!

To that extent, it was supremely formulaic, and cliché ridden. the climax did not however, come as a total surprise, as there were just a few directions to the contrary too many, to sit with placid unbridled ease within a once-bitten, too-many times suspicious, mind!

In the end, did this add to "imhalass"s original tale? Or detract FROM it?

IMHO with all due respect, very much the latter, I'm afraid! Sorry!

R.S.

I liked the story for it's thoughtful dialogue. The only point I do not agree with is why the writer's woman M/C almost always ends up with the better "cheese". This is prevalent in most of your 13 stories. I wonder if the thought process you inflict on your story "outline' doesn't allow for more vengeance or stead fastness when to comes to infidelity.

This story went some way to redeeming the 'February Sucks" story which I have always hated despite some of the competent and brilliant writers who have lauded it as a masterpiece. I am particularly impressed that the author of the original story (imhapless) complimented it. Thank You, ignore the poor reviews herein. there are none so blind as those that refuse to see. 5.

I completely concur with Southdown's comment below and having had the misfortune to read FS had to steel myself to tackle this. What a pleasant surprise that what resulted was a completely credible tale of reconciliation. When I read FS I totally trolled the author in the comments so in the interests of fairness I would like to commend GA on a well written and thoroughly engaging tale. Five stars, sir.

I think you coped out on the ending. This woman deliberately chose her work over her husband even though she knew he would come to her if she called. She uses all of the normal excuses of a cheating wife. Load of crap.

Well written. I like this ending much better than the original one.

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If I had a brother, and my wife could save his sorry ass I'd be for it. Heck, I'd approve of her screwing an ape in Macy's window if that's what it took. All I've got is a couple of older sisters and mean as they were to me growing up, I'd still give that ape that famous little blue pill if that was what it took to save them!

Anderson suffers from Hypergraphia, a need

to keep writing long past the appropriate time

to stop. I thought he’d never end the obsession

dithering of the MC.

Come on George, making it longer don’t make it

better. You’re not writing a book just a sequel.

You overcook your work.

OKAY finish but something is missing to satisfactorily complete the story

Cheating is never for the greater good, cheating is always for the singular good. He should have exposed her cheating when he discovered it, then exposed Beltran to his wife, then divorced Ashley. That was a decision they both should have made.

Kurt and Mindy Beltran should have gone to Vegas for a long weekend to help them both get clarity about their respective marriages. They both seemed "stuck" about whether they could forgive their spouse. I'm certain they could have figured out a way to work through their stress and uncertainty. Not that she is untrustworthy, but Ashley would of course be expected to stay with Tom and Melinda while her husband was out of town.

I've always had a big issue with the initial premise because yes, Ashley could have called Kurt and while there may be some way to explain this lapse, I don't think this story really managed it, which is a shame because so long as I gloss over that point, I enjoy the reconciliation at the end. But intellectually, I'm not convinced it was earned. At least you lampshaded it yourself, so I think you knew it was the hardest part to get away with.

Your male characters seem to all have the same root characteristic. Their importance on steering the story into the realm of plausibility is staggering. There never seems to be an alternative Without the male characters acquiescing to the females wishes. Which some consider a happy ending. Your writing is beyond reproach, simply one of the best writers on the entire site not just LW

Happy New Year! Wishes of Health Wealth and Happiness for you and your family in 2024

Huh?

10 Big Blazing Stars for George Andersen, However, He need to divorce his slut wife to teach her a lesson. He knows that she lied and she cheated, He can't trust her for anything now. She could just as easily lie and cheat on him again when she is inconveniently "stuck" again. She could just as easily fuck another guy like she did Chad. Kurt needs to take Chad's wife to Vegas for a weekend to both get some revenge to let the two cheating assholes get some of their own medicine. That is the only way to even things out. The divorce the slut wife because, she is a slut. Unless he can turn off all his feelings of betrayal and just keep her for his whore. She will still cheat again, but if he don't care then it would work out 'ok'. Thanks George, good job. Thanks, Burster2U

Setting up an utterly impossible scenario so as to justify the actions of cold, vicious female characters seems to be the hallmark of this author.

"Well done." (The highest compliment in the navy for exceptional work.) Like Buster (below) I'd give 10 stars but I would add one.

Too much rationalization- she chose to cheat and admitted she enjoyed it. The MC caved on this one

Machiavelli would be proud

Sorry, but cheating is cheating, is cheating. No way someone as “bright” as she was didnt think it through especially as it is mentioned repeatedly that she did this to rationalize her behaviour. Sorry can’t buy that. She had no respect for him.

You are a fine writer to be able to convince readers to accept that a husband could accept a wife cheating under conditions you presented.NOT this reader..the husband was available at a call to provide the service she needed..sorry premeditated on her part and intentional choice by her to exclude husband..Its divorce all the way. The MC in this story simply took the excuse to remain with her.To me he is a man with very little self respect or pride..4 stars just for getting readers to accept your MCs choice.Any husband pulling similar gambit would be a divorced man very quickly...JZK..

A really well written follow up to the original and better in one crucial way which is there was an actual ending to the story which the original was missing. Did Ashley cheat? Of course she did. She could and should have spoken to her husband and asked his help and didn't do that. Nor did she really explain why she didn't do that. The "space station" and "not part of the team" excuses were just that excuses to cover her awful behaviour. Should the MC have forgiven her? Should he have booted her? Both options are valid and he got answers he was happy to accept and live with so the way it was written the reconciliation was valid. Yes I know some people froth at the mouth about reconciling after one partner cheats and believe that there is no reasons why that should happen. That's their choice and if they are happy with black and white then go live your life with your beliefs and be happy. But firstly life is complicated and usually many shades of grey and as such we all need to consider all the options. Secondly if an author develops a plot with a burn or a reconciliation then does it feel believable for the characters portrayed. So I try and judge a story on does it work for those people and not does it work for me. In this scenario it does work for him and her. Personally I think Ashley got off lightly for making a surprisingly stupid decision and think she wasn't being truly honest and transparent. But its a great story and deserves 5 stars. BardnotBard

Mr. Super Pussy.

Very well done. Ashley is such a great character, quirky and sexy and unique.. Made it easier to stomach the reconciliation which is just about believable given the story structure. The thing that isn't believable is this idea that someone needs to get fucked in order to "clear the mind" and to get past a mental block, like sex is some magic solution to intractable problems. This is absurd but as it is central to the plot I guess we make allowance for fictions sake.

The lengths writers go to justify cuckoldry never ceases to amaze me.

Can't write one MC with an ounce of self-respect.

Horse crap… everytime she needs to solve a major problem is with a penis!? Porn star Doc I say. Been away from her husband and did not think of him … horse crap again .. she wanted who the penis she got … end of story

I prefer the version where Kurt rightfully kicks Ashley to the curb where she belongs and he ends up with Melinda after Tom goes off the rails. Justice is served there.