All Comments on 'Friendship into Lust into Love'

by jalbpowsl

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pkreed71pkreed71about 12 years ago

That was great. Perfectly paced slow buildup of tension and then BAM! Right to the point. Nice work! I look forward to reading more!.

JspeederJspeederabout 12 years ago
Brilliant

Perfect mix of everything, so romantic and sweet, so steamy and sexy, all around fantastic job.

blackdragon54blackdragon54about 12 years ago
wowsers

great story i look forward to reading more of your work, either a sequel of these two or something else. Way to go!!!

hathorbr1hathorbr1about 12 years ago
Beautiful Story!

I really loved this story, but I do have one small critique. When you spelled "whoa" woah, that was wrong. But other than that, very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Totally enjoyable

One of the best stories I have read on this site for a long time. Beautifully structured, the emotional atmosphere developed engagingly and realistically, with the nuances of passion exquisitely and relentlessly tweaked as they climbed the peaks of love-driven lust following years of unrequited need.

Ginger630Ginger630over 3 years ago

Love this story! Friends to lovers stories are my favorite. They had great chemistry. Beautifully done!

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