by jalbpowsl
Love this story! Friends to lovers stories are my favorite. They had great chemistry. Beautifully done!
One of the best stories I have read on this site for a long time. Beautifully structured, the emotional atmosphere developed engagingly and realistically, with the nuances of passion exquisitely and relentlessly tweaked as they climbed the peaks of love-driven lust following years of unrequited need.
I really loved this story, but I do have one small critique. When you spelled "whoa" woah, that was wrong. But other than that, very well written!
great story i look forward to reading more of your work, either a sequel of these two or something else. Way to go!!!
Perfect mix of everything, so romantic and sweet, so steamy and sexy, all around fantastic job.
That was great. Perfectly paced slow buildup of tension and then BAM! Right to the point. Nice work! I look forward to reading more!.