All Comments on 'Gushing Greta Ch. 05'

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smokytysmokytyover 8 years ago

Okay the sadistic side of me likes that Tyrone gave her a good booty fucking to shut her up. I hope Tyrone doesn't abuse Greta. Let him want her in his own dominant way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Rape, underage sex, drugs...

You do read the papers, right? Teenagers are physically incapable of keeping a relationship secret. The principle, the teachers and the students would be in prison, sued for more money than Bill Gates and the community would have hounded them out.

brandedbrainbrandedbrainover 8 years agoAuthor
RE: Rape, underage sex, drugs...

1) There are no underage characters. Everyone in the story are seniors, 18-years-old.

2) Those aren't the only unrealistic aspects of the story. These are characters acting unrealistically, so it follows that they would have unrealistic circumstances.

3) I do this for fun, so whatever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
some of the people making comments on fuck stories should spend their time in church

Thanks for the entertaining story. Sort of like a roller coaster - what comes next might be totally different than what just happened

Do like the dialogue. Teens talking dirty

The story is more dream fantasy than anything else. In 5 chapters Greta has been owned by many partners she never sees again. Its a different way of writing. Not complaining but more like a dream sequence on drugs than a wild story that could actually happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
One rough pecker

And his name was Tyrone.

Ha.

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