by brandedbrain
Thanks for the entertaining story. Sort of like a roller coaster - what comes next might be totally different than what just happened
Do like the dialogue. Teens talking dirty
The story is more dream fantasy than anything else. In 5 chapters Greta has been owned by many partners she never sees again. Its a different way of writing. Not complaining but more like a dream sequence on drugs than a wild story that could actually happen.
1) There are no underage characters. Everyone in the story are seniors, 18-years-old.
2) Those aren't the only unrealistic aspects of the story. These are characters acting unrealistically, so it follows that they would have unrealistic circumstances.
3) I do this for fun, so whatever.
You do read the papers, right? Teenagers are physically incapable of keeping a relationship secret. The principle, the teachers and the students would be in prison, sued for more money than Bill Gates and the community would have hounded them out.
Okay the sadistic side of me likes that Tyrone gave her a good booty fucking to shut her up. I hope Tyrone doesn't abuse Greta. Let him want her in his own dominant way.