Her Husband's Weekend Gift

No thanks. Not badly written, but the story is of no interest to me and the characters a bit vile.

Well this guy has lost his mind. No husband that is sane would do this to his wife. A truly sick person. But i guess the world is full of sick people. His idea of love is not what most people think love is evidently.

I love the battle of the comments. Some heavy hitters here, Lue, RR,and cd for a few. Let me join in, I find just another story about a willing cuck, and his whore wife. Nothing else to say here.

To the poster below:

My wife and I have sometimes had sex with other people. We did this together and sometimes separately. Once my wife went off for a week with a former boyfriend on a road trip. We've had foursomes and threesomes with both sexes, and had a lot of fun doing it. I love watching my wife have sexual fun with me or with others.

We are in our early to mid 50s and are still happily married going on thirty years now.

I liked this story.

Good as a fiction story . Aside from all the how could the hubby want this to a supposed wife in love with her family and hubby allow it. As a hubby or wife don't you evolve in your marriage. What was great the first five years isn't what's great the next five and do on . It's a story so mistakes are ok but I think as if it were me would any man know what his partner needs not do it . Why bring a person or in this case a friend to fuck your wife the way she needs. Her love for you will go from thanks for allowing it to happen to more love for the person who is giving you what you need. Kids are not oblivious either and will grow up seeing this dynamic and will not respect there parents wether it be in the open or secretly. The hubby not only picked a friend but his former commanding officer who will no doubt start to control both hubby and wife . I know some say they know people like this and it works but the % has to be below 1% of the time. People I know that cheat , swing or swap really just want different bodies to fuck . You can hear the lack of disrespect about there partner when they speak about their lives. I feel if the person your with is not enough for you sexually than don't settle in a relationship with them. Stay single or divorce because you will only confuse the kids , especially when there as young as the ones in this story. Why do guys when they are younger try to make a girl swallow, cum on there face or fuck there ass? At that age it's a dominant thing but when your married for years and years your supposed to trust your partner. Not feel that tomorrow he's gonna go fuck his coworkers because she lets him fuck her ass or his wife is getting it hard and aggressive from someone else. Young guys nine out of ten times will get girls to do those things and then they brag to all there friends about it . They will also move to the next girl and try to do it to her. Men usually are assholes when it comes to sex so this dominat former commander of your husband will eventually either fall totally in love and want you to himself or just use and abuse the two of you as an inferior sexual conquest that he has at his beck and call.

A good first effort. I hope there are more stories in this series.

Pretty well written for a first story, but one minor comment. You wrote that her pussy stretched to accommodate his thick cock, but he had just had four fingers in her. Since she had deep throated him earlier without complaint, his cock could not have been so thick I would think. A few words changed would have corrected this minor discord in the narrative.

more cuck shit.

As I read the story, she was married to one and being "served" by the other with something her husband didn't wish to provide. I didn't see her as the person doing the "serving".

I agree that any relationship setup as they seem to be settling into is not easy to make work, and as you say jealousy or other problems could arise, but there are people who make relationships like this succeed long term. I have known a few.

The human animal is amazingly adaptable, WhackDoodle.

Lue

And no two men will share a woman...at least not for long. At some point jealousy will flare, intimacies will be compromised and who's caught in the middle? The 4 children who will see their formerly attentive mother divide her attention and love from one man to two.

Not exactly a recipe for a happy marriage. While the sex wasfantastic, the husbands character, along with the wife's was decidedly lacking.

Yes after reading half of this, I have no doubt you are a bit thick.

Loving Wives needs more female authors.

Submitting your first story in the Loving Wives category is a brave (or, as in my case, naive) undertaking. The LW commentariat can be ferocious.

I liked the idea of the story. A husband who could say to his wife "there are things that would make you happy that I can't give you and I think you should get them elsewhere" is a treasure. Very few men are secure enough within themselves to take that chance. This story had a husband surreptitiously arranging for that to happen and a wife allowing it to occur.

That said, I felt that the biggest flaw in the story was the speed with which the wife character succumbed to the suggestion by her husband and the proposals made by the 'more forceful' other man. There seemed to be little in the way of deep reflection on her part as to what she was doing.

I would have expected the process to take days of slow seduction rather than hours (or maybe even minutes?). I thought the story would have been better for a longer description of his seduction and her emotional state whilst succumbing to that seduction.

I thought the style of writing and the construction of the story were quite good. The story flowed well and was very readable. There were few distracting errors in the use of the English language, but a story is always better when there are none. 'Out of site' (sight?), 'Now was he being so ...' (nor was he being so?), and 'While she'd went' (gone?) were a few that grated with me. (I am somewhat pedantic with the English language. Others may be more tolerant.)

But, overall, I thought it was a worthy contribution and a little different from the standard LW story.

Lue

Ps: I strongly recommend SecretSexyWriter's recent article 'A Fucking English Lesson' for all authors and commenters contributing their thoughts to Literotica.

the size of the cock, the volume of the tits, the quality of the sex. You take two super charged sex demons and everyone knows they will have a long meaningful happy marriage. Look at the super fuck-toy celebrities, professional athletes, imposing influential world leaders. All their marriages are solid as a rock, and its all because of the great sex. Right?

Once the kids are gone and their retirement funds are secure, what use will Tru have for her boring humiliated timid husband? Tru and Kit will be traveling the world, fucking like rabbits, while her husband (what's his name?) sits at home to mind the house and jack off his useless penis. What a beautiful story.

I read your Bio and can see now that the story was actually written from the female point of view. I tend to like to read stories that lean to the BTB but prefer ones that have reconciliations in them (everyone should get a second chance). The thought that the husband wanted Kit to move near them so he could have her when ever she wanted him was a bit bazaar. At what point does she want to be with Kit more than her husband?

I didn't see where you stated how long they have been married. Yes they have 4 kids and they were married 2 years before the first but they could be 2 sets of twins or what ever combo which would mean they have only been married at the most 10 years, could you next time make your time line a little clearer.

Though I scratched my head a few times during the story I still finished it. I give you a 5 for being brave enough to subject your self to the abuse for this and any other stories you write. Good luck in the future. I look forward to reading more of your stories

ps: don't let Anonymous fool you if they had the courage to use a user name and fill in the Bio instead of just No Answer they would be more believable.

To those of you who offered criticism, thank you. Those who offered something constructive as feedback, thank you more. I appreciate your support as I dip my toes in the piranha filled waters of LW. I assure you I have a thick skin.