All Comments on 'Holly Grows Up'

Very very hot!! Could have continued this longer. But I am shocked at K's inconsideration and lack of simple sense. These were wild, inexperienced virgins, for heaven's sake. Fuck them thoroughly, that's fine. They wanted it, they flaunted it, it wasn't nonconsent, that's fine. But cumming in their virgin pussies? That's NOT done. After all they are inexperienced virgins, definitely not on the pill. And at their age, they could get pregnant after just one insertion of semen. How did that not happen, TTT?

Way too short. I see both of those horny teenagers bringing there inexperienced boyfriends to him hoping that he will teach them how to melt their young women's minds with orgasmic pleasure. It would also give him a couple more shots with the two horny girls... maybe even take their anal cherries as part of the lessons.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Well that’s a good wank read for the boys, but quite well written

Absolutely delicious! I had a three month affair with a very naughty, smokin' hot little high school girl when I was 42. She hit on me. I couldn't say no and was immediately obsessed and also remained rock hard after coming as I was more turned on than ever. Best sex I've ever had. Thanks for the memories!

PLEASE tell us about that sexy break with Sara!

Graphic writing with super story. Can’t wait for more. But now on to your other work.

Really gets your blood up. Illegal or not, it is still sexually exciting. One of my favorites. A 5 Star Rating.

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his wife?

What a hot story. I fantasize about fucking

A young hot teen. This story really turned me on

and he got to break to young virgins in with a cock though it sounded like they had lost their cherries using a dildo .....nice story but what happened at the Spring break.....

To Sara's Spring Break?

Or is that one more that you are gonna get around to - one of these days? ;-)

they wanted to learn everything...

This brought back the memories of me losing my cherry to a "mature" man. I came 3 times while reading it...thanks for the great read!!

This is a fun fantasy. A nice, light read. Thanks.

Very nice story without having to 'work' up a full series (I like those too!). Nice change of pace. Keep them coming!

Very hot! Keep it up ;0)

Fantastic. Now Holly has lost her cherry why not make this a series of holly's adventures, I'm sure she would make a great little slut. The possibilities with her are endless.

So very, very, naughty; but oh so very nice.

-- KK in Texas

I loved the way the story moved and you kept the descriptions right on without getting bogged down in details that probably would've hindered the flow of the story. Just a fantastic read!

Very erotic.

nice story.......slow moving, yet erotically charged!

That was a great story that you wrote about Holly and Mr. K and how she was able to seduce him and lose her virginity to him. I like how you introduce Sara in the story and how she lost her virginity to Mr. K. I like how they had fun during the summer and things just ended. I hope you write that story about Sara and Mr. K. during spring break.

New concept from you... loved it, but not as gud as some of your other work..

~Gary