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Click hereWas she not pretty enough? Too inexperienced? Was Nick just into older women?
She'd have been lying if she said she couldn't relate. As hot as she was for her brother, she'd always had a thing for older men. If their father hadn't left them, she'd probably have been chasing after him all day instead of her brother.
Or maybe it was precisely because she hadn't had a father around growing up that she was into older men. That she'd slept with a few of her professors. And not the younger ones.
Fucking Freud.
"Yeah, okay. Let's do that," Nick said.
Veronica fought the urge to yelp in delight.
What did their mothers have that she didn't have anyway?
"Let's just leave a note for Mom-Gee," he said.
"Good idea," she said, trying to sound causal.
"Should we wait for Patty?" he asked.
Her stomach clenched. Why'd he ask that? There was no need for him to ask that.
"I'm sure she won't mind," she said, calmly. "She mentioned that she was going to go over to Kurt's later anyway. That girl cannot wait for our cousin to turn eighteen."
Nick laughed. "Doesn't have to wait much longer."
"That she doesn't," Veronica said.
Kurt's birthday was, after all, the very next day.
If Patty had been a little more like Olivia, Veronica might even have thought that her sister was planning on jumping the gun and wishing Kurt a happy birthday a little early. But she couldn't see Patty doing that. She was the type of girl who came to full stop at every stop sign or red light, even if there weren't any other cars around. The kind of girl who'd actually reported all the tips waiting tables over the summer when filed her taxes.
"She's going to have a hard time getting him away from Aunt Zoey," Nick said as he scrawled out a note to their mother.
"You think?" Veronica asked.
"Are you kidding? That woman is dying to take her son back inside her womb."
"Honestly, I was starting to wonder if it was actually possible for one of our kind to not have a hyperactive sex drive," Veronica said. "But maybe I'm just giving Eric too much credit, wondering why she's sometimes told him she wasn't in the mood."
But now that she thought about it, it did seem pretty clear that Zoey was smitten with her son. She just kept her cards so close to her chest that it was less obvious than it was with, say, Mom-Gee's lust for Eric. The fact that their aunt wasn't always receptive to Eric's advances didn't mean she was any less interested in sex than the rest of them. Just less interested in Eric than most women were.
Veronica could relate to that. She wouldn't have guessed her aunt was in the "Eric is overrated" club along with her though.
"Looks that way," Nick said. "Most people do though."
Veronica snickered.
She probably should have thought that sounded petty. Maybe even thought that it made Nick sound insecure. But she really didn't think he was jealous of their brother. And there wasn't even the slightest trace of bitterness in his voice. He referred to people giving Eric too much credit as casually, and dispassionately, as he referred to her a beautiful.
That cool confidence was incredibly sexy.
Damn, but she needed her brother inside her. Stat.
If not for the fear that Mom-Gee might walk in at any minute and see them violating the standing prohibition on having sex outside the bedrooms, with doors safely closed and locked, she'd have hopped up on the kitchen table and demanded that he do her right then and there. But she supposed she could wait until they got to his apartment.
She just might have to suck his dick on the way over though.
"Okay," Nick said as he finished writing the note. "Good to go."
"Great," Veronica said.
He stared at her for a few moments. Her knees buckled under the pressure of his penetrating gaze. He must have been reading her Libido.
She wished she was half as good at that as he was. Then she'd have a better idea of whether he was agreeing to this just to humor her. Like when he feigned interest in politics.
- COMMENTS
jdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthorThanks as ever for the feedback, anon.
No need to apologize for commenting as you read. I find it useful to know what you're thinking along the way.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoi like the change in dynamic seldom do you see a two women as the head of a house hold in any media
also please forgive that i comment on the chapters as i read them i know some things i mention are answered in the very next chapter after i post i but i like to give feed back and encouragement while it is fresh in my mind
observation. this was a good point why are the echo worlds democracy s only to throw people into tyrannical feudalism seems like you'd want to get them used to the idea of bending the knee
jdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthorWasn't trying to trick anyone, LA. Hope you find it worth continuing to read even though we won't be seeing Frank again for a while...
LA213about 12 years agoTbh, I only kept reading this because I thought you put another potion to eraze Franks memory again and make it more twisted, so they wouldn't remember who they really where. Pluse I thought Hank was another word for sayin Frank ...lol:P
jdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthorBtw, just to be clear, we haven't hear the last of Frank and Ellen.
The plan is to tell four separate stories, then one that ties them all together. First Autumn (parts 1, 2, and 3), then Summer (parts 4, 5, and 6), then Spring (7, 8, and 9), then Winter (10, 11, and 12). Each will reach something of a conclusion, but will also end just as the connection to the broader plot line becomes clear. The final three parts (13, 14, and 15) will then deal with the bigger picture, and will finish the stories of all the characters we'll have met along the way.
So it will be a while before we see them again, but we *will* see them again. :)
jdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthorHey AnHoa Rifleman. Good to hear from you.
Thanks, as always, for the kind words. They are much appreciated. It's really reassuring to see loyal readers such as yourself remain interested, despite the change.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoJD: I was a little upset when you brought the last series to a close. You had just gotten Mom and Son working on a baby which is, in my world anyway, a very positive way for mothers and sons to while away every bit of their free time. I was hoping for several more chapters of continuous, belly slapping, baby-making mom-son couplings. However, I have just now finished this new story and have found it to be a worthy successor to the previous series. The narration had totally captivated me by the second page and I am now securely enmeshed in this new rendition of a great, continuing saga, hopping from one foot to the other waiting for the next chapter. I can now see the wisdom in closing the previous series at the time you did. The ability to recognize the proper time to stop is one of the marks of a great writer and I doubt anyone would deny you that distinction.
I do not think that you closed the chapter too abruptly. You left the reader hanging in pleasurable anticipation of the next chapter. Very, very excellent! AnHoa Rifleman. PS: Glad to see you back after so long. AHR
jdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthorHi Guan.
Good question. I shouldn't have assumed that everyone would know what that means.
POV is short for "point of view", as in the perspective from which the story is told.
First person POV stories are those where the narrator is also the main character, and it's as if they are speaking directly to the reader. The first three parts of this series were written in first person, from Frank's POV. Third person POV stories are told by a narrator who is not actually a character in the story. Sometimes the narrator is aware of everything that is going on (that's called third person omniscient). Sometimes the narrator is privy to the thoughts and feelings of just one character (third person limited). That's what I've switched to. Within any given scene, we only have access to the thoughts of one character, but there are six characters whose perspectives we'll sometimes share: Eric, Nick, Patty, Veronica, Gabriela, and Kurt.
I hope that clears it up!
JD
jdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthorHey, Anon.
Thanks for the feedback. You're right. Looking back, I could have ended the chapter more gracefully.
I hope that as the story continues, you find it easier to root for some of the characters, and find the multiple POVs less distracting.
Just FYI, there will be a new chapter appearing every day from now until Thursday, when Part Four will conclude.
Best,
JD
