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Click here"Oh, Sugar, I love you so much," Jenna cooed as she combed Valencia's hair away from her sweating forehead.
This scene would repeat itself nearly every night. Dan would either fuck his wife, or their lover, or both would suck him off and share his semen.
At eight and a half months pregnant, intercourse became too uncomfortable for the two women and swallowing semen gave Jenna horrible heartburn. But both women did not want Dan to go without, so they would kneel in front of him and stroke his cock until he blasted his semen onto their faces, breasts, and bellies.
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Trenton did slightly agitate his mother when he announced he was converting from Baptist to Catholic so that he and Soo Kin could be married in her church.
:Momma, they worshipping the same God," he said. "They worshipping the same Father, the same Son, and the same Holy Spirit."
"Yeah, but they don't believe in no Bible," Mattie said.
"Oh yes ma'am, we certainly do," Soo Kin defended.
"In fact," she smirked. "We're the ones who wrote it."
"And they worship them statues," Mattie claimed.
"They do not," Trenton said, shaking his head.
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Daniel David Bancroft had his mother's big soulful eyes and light tan skin.
His sister, Danielle Daphne Bancroft, born three days later, had her mother's flaming red hair.
Valencia found herself in an odd position. With the Waggamon and O'Neil family and the Leland family crowding in to the house to see her baby boy and only Dan and Jenna to coo and fuss over the baby girl, Valencia was richer than Dan and Jenna Bancroft.
"Y'all need go love on Danielle some," Valencia hissed to her mother and step-father and father.
Jenna felt tears of happiness sting her eyes when Brian asked, "What's this about another red headed beauty living here?"
"Aw, you Danny's little sister? Huh? You Danny's little sister?" Mattie fussed at the red headed bundle.
THE END
**Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure; I post them here for your enjoyment. Thank you for reading my stories.
Disclaimers: Yes, I know I need an Editor.
Yes, it jumps around too much.
Yes, there's too many people to keep track of.
Yes, it's too long.
Yes, it's in the wrong category.
Yes, it's stupid shit.
And, yes, I suck.
Feel better?
Have a warm and fuzzy kind of day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoYour Author's notes, are almost as funny as your incredible stories, I have seen many people , correcting the Author's, are these teachers, who read these, when they don't have papers to correct? Or maybe Just think , they are better than you, or smarter than you, but couldn't write a story, because they are to perfect, to have a mind, that anyone would read, but it would be perfect English, Thank you for such great story, & I didn't see one mistake in it!!!!!!!
Anonymousover 2 years agoThank you for the entertaining story. I enjoyed the many characters and the changing plot. 5 stars.
Anonymousover 2 years agoYea, it jumped on occasion and the number of characters toward the end was a little challenging. But, I really liked it and encourage you to write more. Thank You!
I was a bit surprised how easily Valencia agreed to what was suggested to and of her.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoAt the beginning of this story, it seemed the relationship between Jenna and Dan was a little formal in an overly gooey sweet way.
But my sweet tooth said: Yum.
The author slipped Valencia into this rose-colored atmosphere so subtly that there was no formal point of change, but rather she blended in with hardly a ripple so that she became a naturally assumed part of the whole relationship. Paul
She just belonged.
Clever.
As I read, I was impressed that there was a very defining difference in the characters -- that none seemed like the others
-- nor even like characters in other tales by this author. JimBob has a talent for depicting characters who clearly are their own person, with enough individual traits -- and often quirkiness -- to make them interesting.
His characters vary so widely, that reading his stories gives you no clue as to what characters will be like in the next story. Except that they will be interesting, and possibly probably not the usual Literotica personalities you might expect.
Better than most 5 star stories.
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousover 4 years agoProbably the best story I have read in many years on this website
Yes there all lots different characters, but that adds to the whole composition in my humble opinion.
Personally I would love a follow up.
It's rare to read a storyline on this site that pulls you to wish the character's well and is not just a fuck story
newpiegirlover 4 years agoI loved all eight pages of this story. It sucked me in so quick and then it had side stories and comedy. This was fabulous, I would love a part two - sort of like an epilogue or update a few years down the line. Don't pay any attention to the haters, they are jealous of your talent and let that be the fuel to produce more great stories!
GeorgyPorgieover 4 years agoThanks for sharing this story... Disregard all the anonymous critics, hell if they could write half this good, they'd be twice blessed and half as envious, or still just A$$h0le$... Keep writing, leave being "perfect" to the anonymous Trolls still living under the bridges waiting for an empty basement room by their parents....
Anonymousover 4 years agoTolstoy's War and Peace would have been a lesser work if he had succumbed to brevity over quality. The same applies to this rambling tale. Yes you could have trimmed a page or 2 but would it have improved the story? I think not. We were transfixed in their lives and the interwoven side threads . The story needed the time and space to be told properly.
