All Comments on 'Hot Tub'

by Brav0tm

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
brush up on your writing skills

You are illiterate. Misspelled words are understandible, but you you misspell the same very simple words over and over. I say this from the standpoint of an overly educated guy who can't spell.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So Hot

WOW what a great stort had me and my man fucking like rabbits ,look forward to reading more mmmm.xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Distractingly bad writing

This story is one run-on sentence after another! Try using some punctuation!

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