All Comments on 'Hot Tub'

by Brav0tm

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Distractingly bad writing

This story is one run-on sentence after another! Try using some punctuation!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So Hot

WOW what a great stort had me and my man fucking like rabbits ,look forward to reading more mmmm.xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
brush up on your writing skills

You are illiterate. Misspelled words are understandible, but you you misspell the same very simple words over and over. I say this from the standpoint of an overly educated guy who can't spell.

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