All Comments on 'Hot Welcome Home Ch. 01'

but 26/28c?.. what's that in height? 4'5"?.. it's nearly impossible to have such a small body..

that was hot. turned me on .. im dripping wet now

Very good and hot start. You have laid a reasonable groundwork for what could be an awesome series. Please continue. Add Mom, sisters, etc as needed.

that was hot....i'm so wet make me cum baby..

Man, that was great! I agree, it's a great start to a series. Any chance of more?

its hot.. everything happen a lil fast for my taste but it made me wet

Im waitin 4 da next chapter!

I realize it's been a long time since this was written, but it's really very good, and a continuation would be great.

if you please have a continuation of this story its very good...

All the potential to entertain lost on lack of editing. Just take your time, your readers don't have to cum in less than seven minutes. Let it breathe a little and smooth out the little things. But I agree with the prior comment, fake women stand out in prose. What do they really look like?

"To be continued." - Well, that was a lie...

And at what time did you awaken from this dream?