All Comments on 'How I Became My Wife's Wife'

It was a nice little twist in the end, but the story felt like it was written in 5 minutes with no rewrite or editing. Could have been a lot better.

second chapter with more detail

Take your time and explore details. Might want a chastity device for "Wifely".

Needs more development and details.

But don't give up!

Keep practicing.

Idea is cute though sort of rushed, it could do with more filling out. I get the feeling the author was beating his little weewee (not a bad thing) as he wrote the story. Set down and write some more, you're worth reading ......