by Wifelywife
Idea is cute though sort of rushed, it could do with more filling out. I get the feeling the author was beating his little weewee (not a bad thing) as he wrote the story. Set down and write some more, you're worth reading ......
Needs more development and details.
But don't give up!
Keep practicing.
Take your time and explore details. Might want a chastity device for "Wifely".
It was a nice little twist in the end, but the story felt like it was written in 5 minutes with no rewrite or editing. Could have been a lot better.