All Comments on 'Human Resources'

This was a good story, I enjoyed it, but I just have one comment. The transistion from planning to have the slave to being a slave was extremely sudden. I got a little lost by that. Had their friend Samantha betrayed them to Dora Lynn? How did they acquire the powder?

Otherwise, good job.

-S-

The plot was better than the flash story (sorry forgotten its title). Didn't have a problem with the switch timing and it was a surprise that worked. I like the breif and pointed writing style describing the outfits.

and that is why when you plan to make your new boss your slave, you don't discuss it on what seems to be a company email.