All Comments on 'Human Resources'

and that is why when you plan to make your new boss your slave, you don't discuss it on what seems to be a company email.

The plot was better than the flash story (sorry forgotten its title). Didn't have a problem with the switch timing and it was a surprise that worked. I like the breif and pointed writing style describing the outfits.

This was a good story, I enjoyed it, but I just have one comment. The transistion from planning to have the slave to being a slave was extremely sudden. I got a little lost by that. Had their friend Samantha betrayed them to Dora Lynn? How did they acquire the powder?

Otherwise, good job.

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